Now, the streets are worn and cobbled,
but among them I still hover, hobble—
survivor of the fate, the madness, of the war.
Then, it was otherworldly,
that Italian sketchbook summer,
flesh-flushed out in lush, romantic watercolor form.
Then, we walked
through wildflowers,
caught our dresses on the hands of orchids,
bridged the brushsong birdsong,
daisies threaded in our hair.
Now, that page has turned,
but I return to the art of tenderness alone—
stumbling, trying still
to catch our spirits’ crash
before the fall broke us to stone.
© 2025 Jennifer Wagner
Shay’s Word Garden Word List: Tenderness
Day 24 NPM
Beautifully written, Jennifer. I think we all try to go back either in reality or in our minds... and find ourselves stumbling!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful and poignant, Jennifer. These lines stand out for me, especially because of the sounds, and they remind me of time spent in Italy:
ReplyDelete‘Then, it was otherworldly,
that Italian sketchbook summer,
flesh-flushed out in lush, romantic watercolor form.’
I love the way you express that frutiful search of the past... how much it changed as "survivor of the fate, the madness, of the war."
ReplyDeleteThis is so evocative. You drew me in to that Italian summer. I especially love "I return to the art of tenderness alone". Very beautiful writing.
ReplyDeleteFilled with such yearning, made achingly beautiful by the alliteration and assonance--beautiful, lush language. This past
ReplyDelete"Then, we walked
through wildflowers,
caught our dresses on the hands of orchids,
bridged the brushsong birdsong,
daisies threaded in our hair." 💙
I LOVE that third stanza....the imagery, the feeling it gives me. And then it's a thud, to read the ending: "the art of tenderness alone" and the "fall" that "broke us to stone."
ReplyDeleteI, too, love "Italian sketchbook summer." The whole thing makes me want to think of Italian girls who scattered to the winds after the war. My older friend across the street from me actually was a war bride.
ReplyDelete"the art of tenderness alone" is an art we all need to practice.
ReplyDeleteFull of Lawrencian overtones, Jennifer, which you wield with your singular poetic flair.
ReplyDelete*what* a close ~
ReplyDeleteThat was so beautiful, Jennifer! I loved it!
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