Thursday, April 24, 2025

Now & Then

 

 

Now, the streets are worn and cobbled,

but among them I still hover, hobble—

survivor of the fate, the madness, of the war.

 

Then, it was otherworldly,

that Italian sketchbook summer,

flesh-flushed out in lush, romantic watercolor form.

 

Then, we walked

through wildflowers,

caught our dresses on the hands of orchids,

bridged the brushsong birdsong,

daisies threaded in our hair.

 

Now, that page has turned,

but I return to the art of tenderness alone—

stumbling, trying still

to catch our spirits’ crash

before the fall broke us to stone.

 

 

© 2025 Jennifer Wagner

 

Shay’s Word Garden Word List: Tenderness

dVerse Poetics: Fated, OLN

Day 24 NPM

 

11 comments:

  1. Beautifully written, Jennifer. I think we all try to go back either in reality or in our minds... and find ourselves stumbling!

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  2. Beautiful and poignant, Jennifer. These lines stand out for me, especially because of the sounds, and they remind me of time spent in Italy:
    ‘Then, it was otherworldly,
    that Italian sketchbook summer,
    flesh-flushed out in lush, romantic watercolor form.’

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  3. I love the way you express that frutiful search of the past... how much it changed as "survivor of the fate, the madness, of the war."

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  4. This is so evocative. You drew me in to that Italian summer. I especially love "I return to the art of tenderness alone". Very beautiful writing.

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  5. Filled with such yearning, made achingly beautiful by the alliteration and assonance--beautiful, lush language. This past
    "Then, we walked

    through wildflowers,

    caught our dresses on the hands of orchids,

    bridged the brushsong birdsong,

    daisies threaded in our hair." 💙




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  6. I LOVE that third stanza....the imagery, the feeling it gives me. And then it's a thud, to read the ending: "the art of tenderness alone" and the "fall" that "broke us to stone."

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  7. I, too, love "Italian sketchbook summer." The whole thing makes me want to think of Italian girls who scattered to the winds after the war. My older friend across the street from me actually was a war bride.

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  8. "the art of tenderness alone" is an art we all need to practice.

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  9. Full of Lawrencian overtones, Jennifer, which you wield with your singular poetic flair.

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  10. That was so beautiful, Jennifer! I loved it!

    Yvette M Calleiro :-)
    http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com

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Thank you for your thoughts!