Wednesday, April 30, 2025

Desert Whippersnapper

 

The whip snake came

looking for black-throated sparrows

in the cholla,

twisting her braided scales

around the palo verdes

and catclaws.

She was nervous, though, and hungry,

and it was nearing night.

 

She didn’t notice

the minor shift on the limb

of a grandaddy saguaro,

so busy was she hissing and striking

at anything that moved,

mouth gaping like a blood red tulip.

 

A quick and seasoned cactus wren,

with irises glittering and peeled on the scrub below,

shuttled her brood

into their own sleepy hollow

in the arm of the saguaro—

and tipclawed out again

to watch the night feast.

 

Silent horseman of the desert,

the great horned owl, swooped

and gripped that whip

like a coachman

severing the spine in his talon.

 

Mrs. Wren Marple thought to herself,

I didn’t even have to miss Fallon!

I’m always in the wrong place at the right time—

I saw all this before Law & Order at nine!

 

 

© 2025 Jennifer Wagner

 

For Shay’s Word Garden Word List

And that’s a wrap, folks!  Thirty poems in 30 days for National Poetry Month were sometimes a heavy task, even for an armchair detective, so today I had to go light!  

 

8 comments:

  1. Congratulations on writing 30 poems in 30 days! That's no small achievement! I have tried it a number of times but only completed it once. It gets harder as you go along, or at least, that's been my experience.

    I was completely taken by surprise by that out of left field ending! I was totally wrapped up in the desert drama, and then that light hearted finish. You've touched all the bases in your 30 poems, a la Christian Walker. And hey, what the heck is he doing on Houston???

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  2. This is a charming and very vivid capture of a particular scene, a specific slice of nature nature and all it metaphors for us. I especially like your very human ending, and the way you've personified without over-sweetening the players here with terms like "..mouth gaping like a blood red tulip.." and "..tipclawed.." "Mrs. Wren Marple" cracked me up. And congrats on thirty poems for April. I used to do it regularly, and its a wonderful--if highly challenging--exercise for sharpening all the poetic tools.

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  3. I could see it all. I love "tipclawed out" and the vivid images. The surprise ending was fun. It reminds me of my cousin in the long ago, on a drive with the grandparents. Grandpa said "the chickens will all be in bed now" and the youngster asked, in disbelief "dont they stay up to watch the Flintstones?" Cute. You used the words to best advantage, with imagination. Well done doing the 30 days of poems.

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  4. I love the visuals in this, and that twist of an ending is so delightful.

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  5. What a marvelous tale of the desert. Such a serious poem until the ending, which provided a most enjoyable twist!

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  6. "from grit to sparkle"-- i believe that's exactly what you've given us here. love!

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  7. “tipclawed” !!! And this: “Silent horseman of the desert,”

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  8. Just an amazing poem, Jennifer, with all the drama an armchair sleuth can provide with their sharp eyes and even sharper words. Congratulations on meeting the 30-day poetry challenge! Quite a feat. ❤

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Thank you for your thoughts!