Saturday, April 5, 2025

Fitz


 

The Fitzgeralds

were aptly named.

 

Shiny and red-faced

on the pickleball court—

 

he, with red bandana,

she, in red bows.

 

He, throwing his weight around,

she, throwing her racket down.

 

Fitzi’s stomping around

in a big red huff

 

like cardinals, territorial,

entitled—

 

in a tiff,

in a fuss

 

after the game—

us, smirking, victorious.

 

 

© 2025 Jennifer Wagner

 

 

PAD Day 5:  write an “After (blank)” poem.  I followed the prompt, except for using it for my title.

NaPoWriMo 

 

Cardinals are territorial and pugnacious and have even been known to fight their own reflections. 

The above poem is loosely based on a mini-pickleball tournament my husband and I surprised ourselves, and the reigning champs, by winning…smirk.

 

3 comments:

  1. "He, throwing his weight around, she, throwing her racket down."
    What a great memory, poem and a fun read!



    Fitzi’s stomping around

    in a big red huff

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  2. Fun read, thanks, enjoyed, especially these rhyming lines
    “He, throwing his weight around,
    she, throwing her racket down.”.

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