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Last night I dreamt about scorpions,
my ex,
a diner,
and a dingy motel.
And being on the run.
I sipped mediocre coffee,
slipped into my best jeans, tight as a tattoo,
bundled up my few belongings
and hit the road—
blue-legged and quick.
There I was cooing,
belly full of scorpion meat,
picking up the sun, shotgun,
for a lift,
—the pair of us,
wily coyotes with a (sometimes) bad rap, but
thriving,
like O’Keeffe,
escaping into the southwestern
desert heat.
© 2025 Jennifer Wagner
Today over at NaPoWriMo (Day 2), the work of Georgia O’Keeffe is mentioned along with an optional prompt. I recently read Roxana Robinson’s biography of O’Keeffe which was excellent—I highly recommend it. Many know O’Keeffe moved to the Santa Fe area where she created some of her most iconic work, and since I’m also a transplant to the southwest (Arizona), this poem is where the muse lead. Also, I did actually have this dream last night.
I recently visited the fabulous Ted DeGrazia Gallery in the Sun Museum in Tucson. I took the above mediocre photo there.
Roadrunners don’t actually have blue legs (more gray/brown), but they do eat scorpions.
What’s Going On? (Open Link)
PAD Day 2 (loosely for "from where I'm sitting")
sinuous as a sidewinder, Jen ~
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ReplyDeleteI see a convergence, the roadrunner and you, which is delightful, especially as the voice in the poem is also wily coyote! An excellent escape!
Roadrunner Roadrunner coyote's after you. Beep beep!
ReplyDeleteI love your ability to make fiction sound so much like fact! I like how you compared the thriving to O'Keefe with the thriving of the 'wily' coyote!
ReplyDeleteGreat atmospheric expression of O’Keeffe’s world, enjoyed the playfulness.
ReplyDeleteOops the above anonymous comment was meant to be from me
DeleteI got right into the mood of this poem. I especially like hitting the road, blue-legged and quick. So well done. A story in a poem.
ReplyDeleteLovely atmosphere in this poem...and jeans "tight as a tattoo" will stay with me and bring a smile!!
ReplyDeleteA delightful sprint - surreal and funny too - Jae
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed this
ReplyDeleteA delight to read, Jennifer, especially "slipped into my best jeans, tight as a tattoo,..." and of course "blue legged and quick." Love the story elements here.
ReplyDeleteOh I loved this, Jennifer, the symbols as sharp as a scorpion's sting, yet the sense of escape riding through them all. I especially liked
ReplyDelete"slipped into my best jeans, tight as a tattoo" -- a deft poetic touch.
You run girl, and may it be filled with adventures!
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