Monday, April 7, 2025

cinnamon peal



we like cinnamon

and teal

here in the desert—

 

warm and bright

skies

with a sugar cube cloud

or two

with our spice—

 

like Mexican hot cocoa,

a cup, a flame,

 

as like Ball,

like Burnett,

 

enchan

-tressed

 

in cinnamon, chili,

cayenne—

for squeal-appeal

delight

 

 

© 2025 jennifer wagner

 

dVerse q44:  enchant

NaPoWriMo Day 7

 

*Ball and Burnett:  the red-tressed masters of comedy Lucille Ball and Carol Burnett.

Also, some Cinnamon Teal ducks winter in the southwestern region of Arizona.

 

16 comments:

  1. Sigh. So beautiful. LOVE both Ball and Burnett. And all things cinnamon, especially. Mexican cocoa.

    De

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  2. "Enchan - tressed" and the lovely redhead ladies. How clever and wonderful this is. Imagining them there, with you, sitting around a table, sipping Mexican hot cocoa.

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  3. Your quadrille is wonderfully unique ... clever and tons of adjectives more!

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  4. Great use of spices and flavors for this creative poem . A clever way to weave in enchant.

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  5. You’ve brewed a fine cuppa here!
    -Eric

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  6. Vivid and evocative. Great response to the prompt, your blog is really nice.

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  7. A lovely colourful, spicy quadrille, Jennifer! I’ve never tried Mexican hot cocoa, but it sounds wonderful.

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  8. swoon! (i feel that one word is enough for this enticing poem)

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  9. I can feel the scent... nice to know we were two including cinnamon in our poems.

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  10. So warm and welcoming. Makes me want to heat some cider and go out to watch the sunset. =)

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  11. I loved the imagery in your poem, Jennifer! So vibrant and beautiful!

    Yvette M Calleiro :-)
    http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com

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  12. Beautifully scribed..evoking thoughts, memories, through aromas, tastes

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  13. What's not to love when you entice all our senses, Jennifer! Smooth like the Mexican hot cocoa.

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  14. Once again, you've used your locale to enrich your work to wonderful effect.

    PS--I love Carol Burnett. Have you ever seen the movie The Four Seasons? It's one of my all time favorites. Two couples (one of them Burnett and Alda), long time friends, get together through each of the four seasons. It's both hilarious and touching.

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  15. I admire how you can write airily and with a smile, as here, and also sharp and pointed as a cacti needle in others ~

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