Thursday, January 30, 2025

The Crow Angel

 

Crow, I said,

that’s a stone in your beak,

not a seed.

 

But she didn’t stop

and kept tapping against the rock.

 

It split in two

and out came a parasite

which perched on her back.

 

It grew over time, over time, over time,

and crow bowed down

and died.

 

I lay on the bed

of her black feathers

and they turned white,

 

in my deepest January,

as snow fell,

lingering, drifting, layering,

 

while all burned up around me.

The feathered angel-kiss kept me

cold, safe and numb.

 

Arrows swarmed the air—

hissing, a warring beast

took aim, fired—

 

and then Thor’s arms came

and I flew

burning like a phoenix—

 

the foul dart,

pulled

from my back,

 

crushed in my taloned hand,

 

fell in fire, sulfur,

 

sand.

 

 

© 2025 Jennifer Wagner

 

In Your Deepest January at What’s Going On?

 

12 comments:

  1. Jennifer, this is the most fantastic poem, my favourite of yours ever! The concept, the story, the imagery, just an amazing poem! Wow. And I love that it came to you on waking. Pure inspiration.

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  2. Huginn or Muninn? My dad used to call my little friend and me Huggin and Muggin.

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  3. I wish such wonderful imagery would come into MY mind upon waking. I enjoyed the images, the story, the wording you used, the ending!

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  4. Incredible Poem! So vivid and imaginative, I really like it. It's captivating and I just want to read it over and over again.

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  5. I enjoyed the words that tell the story of a rising. How lovely!

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  6. Your poem is striking in its imagery, Jennifer. The way you intertwine the crow's journey with your own, the shift from black feathers to white, from cold safety to fiery renewal... soooo beautiful!

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Thank you for your thoughts!