Crow, I said,
that’s a stone in your beak,
not a seed.
But she didn’t stop
and kept tapping against the rock.
It split in two
and out came a parasite
which perched on her back.
It grew over time, over time, over time,
and crow bowed down
and died.
I lay on the bed
of her black feathers
and they turned white,
in my deepest January,
as snow fell,
lingering, drifting, layering,
while all burned up around me.
The feathered angel-kiss kept me
cold, safe and numb.
Arrows swarmed the air—
hissing, a warring beast
took aim, fired—
and then Thor’s arms came
and I flew
burning like a phoenix—
the foul dart,
pulled
from my back,
crushed in my taloned hand,
fell in fire, sulfur,
sand.
© 2025 Jennifer Wagner
In Your Deepest January at What’s Going On?
Jennifer, this is the most fantastic poem, my favourite of yours ever! The concept, the story, the imagery, just an amazing poem! Wow. And I love that it came to you on waking. Pure inspiration.
ReplyDeleteYour comment made my day, Sherry!
DeleteHuginn or Muninn? My dad used to call my little friend and me Huggin and Muggin.
ReplyDeleteHa! :) I like your dad.
DeleteI wish such wonderful imagery would come into MY mind upon waking. I enjoyed the images, the story, the wording you used, the ending!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Mary!
DeleteIncredible Poem! So vivid and imaginative, I really like it. It's captivating and I just want to read it over and over again.
ReplyDeleteAw, thank you so much.
DeleteI enjoyed the words that tell the story of a rising. How lovely!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Sumana!
DeleteYour poem is striking in its imagery, Jennifer. The way you intertwine the crow's journey with your own, the shift from black feathers to white, from cold safety to fiery renewal... soooo beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThank you very much, Bing!
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