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From the watchtower
I saw them, wildflowers
drifting downstream.
I followed on foot, from loamy bank
to bank, and found you
in that neglected canoe
—you’d chased them, too,
with my heart,
a padlock you’d rescued
for pennies on the dollar,
and handed it back to me,
warm, and melting like wax.
I’d never been able
to find the key,
but you unlocked it
with a poem in Latin,
so haunted, so beautiful,
and unchained all my wildflower tears.
© 2024 Jennifer Wagner
Jennifer, may I offer condolences on the loss of such an important person in your life. Your gratitude and affection for this person shines through your words and feelings.
ReplyDeleteHi JadeLi, I appreciate your thoughts. This poem isn't about the loss of a loved one, but it is interesting to me that is what you saw in the poem!
DeleteLovely and tenderly sustained metaphor here Jennifer and a great ending too.. Loved: "unchained all my wildflower tears."
ReplyDeleteYou express romance so well, Jennifer, whether you know it or not! Latin does have the power to do that, right? It's just poetry in itself 🤩
ReplyDeleteSimply beautiful, Jennifer, and though I know it cannot have been, it reads as effortless. This is one to savor.
ReplyDeleteI love this, especially the wildflower tears at the end. Wonderful.
ReplyDeleteA beautiful poem of love and loss, Jennifer, especially the wildflower tears.
ReplyDeleteOh this is just lovely, Jennifer. It makes my heart go pitter-patter throughout. Lovely moments captured in poetry!
ReplyDeletewildflower tears - lovely
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely read, beautifully flows and wonderful imagery. Makes me smile.😊
ReplyDeleteLOvely poem Jennifer, I like that padlock metaphor...JIM
ReplyDeleteWell, I really like the half stream of conscious but very controlled style there, with easily accessed stanzas, lovely to read, mysterious, intriguing, really enjoyable.
ReplyDeleteYour poem is as lovely as the image you paint of wildflowers drifting downstream ... I enjoyed reading it ... cheers.
ReplyDeleteVery cool!
ReplyDeleteRe-reading this now, I’m with Shay. Beautifully effortless (however much work that was!) I love the story and images too.
DeleteSoothingly romantic, engaging our senses and emotions. A beautiful read, Jen.
ReplyDeleteOh, I love this, Jennifer.🤩
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