it’s just a moment in the snow,
everything so suddenly white,
you lose your balance—
your foggy breath wisp-
a w a y
of yesterday’s rain
in wolf moon howls
through silvered firs—
the sky winking back,
© 2017 Jennifer Wagner
"pouring out a glass of yesterday's rain"
A deep historic, and thoughtful line, lovit_! _m
(A metaphor -yesterday's wine-?)
the words floated through the air as I read them....like snowflakes. Lovely.
The season is sparkled by your words
This is so lovely and organic in the words and the flow of form - it kind of wisps off the page. A wonderfully unique and mesmerizing piece.
This is wonderful...like the winter coming alive.
great, stunning imagery. and I agree: mesmerizing.
Such an enchanting write, I love the style!
what a cool line:
pouring out / a glass / of yesterday's rain
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