I listen to the
darkness,
the beautiful kind
when the lights are
off,
and I close my eyes
and see the last
light
burned into my mind.
I sit, in my poetry
nook,
in the corner of the
room,
in a chair, arms
leaning, at rest,
my feet propped.
I listen, listen,
ceiling fan low,
box fan high, pointed
toward me
to carry the sound
of the silver crackle
of the millionth star
no less wonderful
than the first.
And it might be
yours, the only light
in this dark room
tonight.
© 2014 Jennifer
Wagner
For all you beautiful,
amazing poets out there. Thank you.
Jennifer, I really love the atmosphere you created in this poem. Very ethereal and dream like. Makes me want to sit in that nook!
ReplyDeleteAnd it might be yours, the only light
ReplyDeletein this dark room tonight.
Such a reassurance to be with one close to one's heart. Nicely Jennifer
Hank
Ah this is just what I need to hear right now---I am struggling with my muse--and your piece reminds me to listen!
ReplyDeletesmiles...you take us to that serene place...where nothing exists in the dark but our breathing...and that one light...that could be theirs...smiles. listening is def the key...
ReplyDeleteAh-h-h – this is the stuff of goosebumps. Just a lovely sentiment that evokes a shared connection between like-minded people. Beautiful!
ReplyDelete"...the silver crackle of the millionth star"....and those closing lines - spectacular. I totally love this poem!
ReplyDeletein the dark we can hear our thoughts as we search for that light..I could picture myself in this nook with a fan blowing..
ReplyDeletethis just makes me want to write....gorgeous! love,love the ending!
ReplyDeletethis is lovely! beautiful.
ReplyDeleteA little corner!!
ReplyDeleteThis is a beautiful poem, Jennifer. I like the peaceful atmosphere, the reflective tone and the closing lines are just perfect.
ReplyDeleteah..such an atmosphere is a must for that spark..a lovely write
ReplyDelete"the silver crackle
ReplyDeleteof the millionth star
no less wonderful
than the first.
And it might be yours, the only light
in this dark room tonight."
Wow. Loved it!
I love this tribute to poetry. The scene, the anticipation - it's really great!
ReplyDeletethis definitely feels like an atmosphere I could get lost in. I do enjoy a bit of darkness (the beautiful kind) from time to time.
ReplyDeleteAt last, a beautiful dark poem. You know, I have those moments too. when I turn off the lights and just lie awake for a bit to rest the brain. thanks.
ReplyDeleteAnd thank you for this wonderful poem to all the poets :-)
ReplyDeleteand to you, Jennifer :) ~
ReplyDeleteWow so beautiful and uplifting that one of us might be that millionth star. I must confess that I listen to the friendly darkness as well. It calms and soothes the mind. What a lovely piece.
ReplyDeleteAnd I like your tag line. Poetry. From grit to sparkle.
ReplyDeleteVavoom!!!
heya...its been pretty good....yesterday was the last week of summer school so now i have real freedom...a week from vacation...yard saling tomorrow to make some extra money...and clean out the house a bit....and its hot...ha....
ReplyDeletehow is yours?
Good, good...it's been hot here for us the last few days. Enjoying it while it lasts! Hope your yard sale was a great success...extra $ is a good thing...and cleaning out the house is too...smiles...
DeleteSo beautiful Jennifer ~ Thank you for your beautiful words ~
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