Now, Mama Deborah was a prophet;
she knew what would
happen.
She’d said a woman
was going to get the
job done.
Sisera had been
dreaming of spoils—silver,
and purple garment
plunder,
a woman on each
shoulder—
his mother, so proud.
Until his mighty 900
were swept away
in the torrent of
Kishon,
and he alone, on foot,
found Jael.
And let’s just say
the stars were not
aligned
in his favor.
You’d like some water?
I can do better,
here’s some milk.
Get cozy,
here’s a blanket,
that’s right,
take a load off.
There now,
rest your head—
they may not have
made swords
fitted for feminine
hands,
but trust me, a woman
knows how to get
creative
when she must—
you may feel
a little sting;
this peg, this hammer
are no
small things.
And it happened, just
like Mama said.
© 2014 Jennifer
Wagner
Notes: Deborah was a prophetess and judge (and poet…smiles) in ancient Israel. Sisera was a notorious commander of the army
of the Canaanites who had oppressed the Israelites for many years. Jael was the woman who defeated him by
driving a tent peg through his temple with a hammer, pinning his head to the
ground.
To
read both prose and poetic accounts of the story of these heroines go
here: Judges 4, 5.
For
last week’s Poets United Midweek Motif: Honoring Woman/Women’s Achievements.
An interesting tale. Leading an army against invaders – certainly qualifies as an achievement. (And here I thought I was a Busy Bee.) Loved: “let’s just say the stars were not aligned in his favor”. A clever spin on an old story.
ReplyDeleteI thought this most interesting to read and how excellently you wrote it.
ReplyDeleteYvonne.
The wife of Heber! Don't turn your back on her, she's a serious woman!
ReplyDeleteI admit, I had not heard this story 'til now. You did a lovely retelling.... no, they may not have made a sword for woman's hands, but would we really expect such a thing to stop a woman?
ReplyDeletedang...its a vicious story....can you imagine driving a tent peg through someones head...geez....
ReplyDeleteexcellent retelling of this ancient tale!
ReplyDeletetwo strikes, three
ReplyDeletea payment's peg driven deep
one flame quenched
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Wow. Fairly new characters for me, but what an interesting back-story. Never underestimate the power of a woman, eh? Great post.
ReplyDeleteThis is exactly why women should rule the world :)
ReplyDeleteWow, that was an achievement!
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed reading this most-interesting poem!
Loved the story here and how you told it!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully told !
ReplyDeleteWhoa! A side of womanhood not often looked at. You wrote this so well, the denouement comes as a shock.
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