Poetry. From grit to sparkle.
Oooooh! Very good!
Wonderful! So glad you joined in :)
lovely childhoodin an empty swing...very cool haiku...nicely spunmy childhood might have ended up in the pond after flying off that swing...smiles.
Wow. That had me feeling all melancholy. Fantastic.
Oh my... this is so melancholy. Nice to see you on Carpe Diem! Enjoy!
Beautiful and melancholy at the same time. I imagine frogs on those lily pads :)
Welcome Jennifer at Carpe Diem. I love the way how you were inspired by the photo for this Carpe Diem Imagination and have shared a wonderfully composed haiku.Thank you and I hope to see you here again. By the way, I am your host on Carpe Diem
aloha Poet Laundry - that "empty swing" is a powerful image. i like that. aloha.
I sensed the melancholy in your words! beautiful haiku!
Beautiful ... I can feel the emotion :)
Wow! So much said in this piece. Wonderful!
So simple. So perfect.
I really like this.
wow... it's amazing how in such few words you can stir such emotion! you are a regular ezra pound. seriously, stirring stuff! makes me want to go back in time and give my kid-self a hug! well done!
Jennifer it is a beautifully sad piece
I so get it...then I get in and pump my legs til I can reach the stars....I am a forever kid :)
Nice reflection of times gone by, Jennifer!Hank
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