It was just a pinpoint of light,
a small hole punched in black—
but there they were—
the river voices
humming
like bees in wildflowers.
When the light grew,
I could see
them walking there, singing—
their limbs limber again,
these forebears—
naked, supple, strong,
who carried all of us
into the light.
They hollered over to me—
grandmothering
isn’t always a quiet affair—
Why, daughter, why
are you sitting in the dark?
These women who bore so many scars
marring their delicious skin,
harvesting beauty into baskets on their backs—
the petals of poetry made from sorrow
and wings
where in dreamstate I weep.
Pillars of fire, lyric pyres into my night—
I ran to them. Ran.
As only in dreams you can.
Ears hungry
for their grandmother
songs again,
to write them,
to journey on—
making dark beauty
from my own scars
naked in the light.
© 2025 Jennifer Wagner
For dVerse Poetics and OLN
My absolute favourite of yours, Jennifer - those grandmother songs that are so needed. I love every line, especially "the petals of poetry made from sorrow and wings where in dreamstate I weep." Wow. Fantastic writing!
ReplyDeleteJennifer, the best kind of dream. One where you can connect with the grandmothers. The whole poem feels like a sacred telling.
ReplyDeleteA stunning poem, Jennifer! I love the thought of ‘the river voices humming
ReplyDeletelike bees in wildflowers’, and the grandmothers’ ‘limbs limber again’, just reading that loosens me up. I also love that ‘grandmothering isn’t always a quiet affair’, and pictured them ‘harvesting beauty into baskets on their backs— the petals of poetry made from sorrow’.
What a beautiful poem, Jennifer! I agree with Sherrie...it definitely is a favorite poem of yours for me too (but ah there are many - smiles). I love that the grandmothers could see and communicate with you...that in your dream you could run to them! What a moving theme.
ReplyDeleteThis has the feel of myth, teaching through storytelling. I love the "humming like bees in wildflowers."
ReplyDelete"I ran to them. Ran. / As only in dreams you can." One feels the urgency to be in their presence. There are so many beautiful lines Jennifer. "the river voices / humming / like bees in wildflowers." My favorite lines.
ReplyDeleteThat is a tremendous starting point; being happy with who and what made you! 😃
ReplyDeleteUnfortunately for me I heard no grandmother songs, nor will I be able to sing them. This is a powerful and beautiful poem.
ReplyDelete"the petals of poetry made from sorrow / and wings / where in dreamstate I weep" I kept coming back to these lines so the vision became a spirit path out of (and into) darkness, and I can picture the scene as space opening through longing, the moments in the dream when you know those you are dreaming are also aware of you. Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThis is absolutely stunning! ❤️❤️ I especially admire this part;
ReplyDelete"When the light grew,
I could see
them walking there, singing
their limbs limber again,
these forebears—
naked, supple, strong,
who carried all of us
into the light"
This flows like a dream filled with grandmother's nature song. It feels like a lucid dream filled with awareness. Just wonderful written filled with wonderful word crafting.
ReplyDeleteFrom title to end, I was captivated by your poem. I really love ..."the petals of poetry made from sorrow and wings"
ReplyDeleteA wonderful song of the mothers, an umbilical to the generations sweet with praise and well aware of the duty. Truly fine.
ReplyDeleteLove this poem, so many great phrases, and it always make you think referring back to the title... the true origin of all the words.
ReplyDeleteSo beautiful, Jennifer! It is as if you are diving deep into mythology to bring back songs that we hear no more.
ReplyDelete"These women who bore so many scars
ReplyDeletemarring their delicious skin,
harvesting beauty into baskets on their backs—"
Dreams can be so real. Gorgeous poem, Jennifer.
Your poetic voice here is beautifully clear and as strong as those grandmothers who inspire, call and sing to you. You made me feel how deep is your connection to them and to your own music, where "the petals of poetry made from sorrow/and wings" enliven your dreams.
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