Monday, August 5, 2013

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She smoked all her cigars
between noon and six,
listening to the bounce
of the sloping rain.

She drank lavender tea from a lowball glass,
let her hair go silver-white, and
never cared what a single soul
thought of it.

Her laugh was always belly deep,
her smile lines, deeper.

She had that knack
for letting everyone
be themselves
and they, by turn,
were able to.

Forget Vogue.
Forget Cosmo
and Elle.

An old wooden porch
frames the perfect face.


© 2013 Jennifer Wagner

I think I want to be her (well, except for the cigars). Linking up to join the fun at dVerse for OpenLinkNight!

32 comments:

  1. Such a vivid write about a woman I would greatly admire. Very nice, Jennifer.

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  2. smiles...she sounds like quite the personality...gotta love letting everyone be themselves...and a wooden porch, that makes the perfect frame...i miss porch sitting, talking to neighbors...

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  3. A really charming piece - with a bit of a folk vibe, to it.

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  4. I love this character, Jennifer. She sounds like she knows herself, and lets everyone SEE her as she really is. I like the second stanza especially. And I haven't sat on a wooden porch since a long time ago when my grandparents had such a porch!!

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  5. Love the picture you leave in the last two lines. Beautiful ending couplet to a lovely piece of character creation poetry :)

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  6. oh she sounds like someone i would like to meet - or someone i would like to be - letting people be who they are and just provide the frame for people to relax and let go as well - what a beautiful face indeed

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  7. Great portrait write.>KB

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  8. I love the person who unfolds from these words. People who let others simply be themselves are rare and precious.
    The last two lines create the perfect frame for this portrait, yes :)
    http://somewhereamelody.blogspot.co.uk/

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  9. The best people bring others up. It seems like this lady is that type. I agree with Claudia, I'd love to meet her. Great title, great poem, great job, Jennifer.

    I'm from the Pacific NW as well!

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  10. loved how personal you've made this...

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  11. i'd really like to have a glass of lavender tea with that lady :)an amazingly vivid and memorable poem, Jennifer.

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  12. Love specially the opening stanza ~ I would love to meet her ~

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  13. Very deft and telling work, Jennifer - a real pleasure to read../ With Best Wishes Scott xx

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  14. She sounds like a woman comfortable in her own skin..congrats on being part of the dVerse Anthology.

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  15. The rhythm and truth here speak to me. I, hope, I grow to be her.

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  16. very descriptive Iike sitting across the table form her

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  17. Excellent tie up with the last line!

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  18. Oh, I just love this! She sounds like the best kind of person to spend a summer afternoon with.

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  19. That is quite a gift, to be oneself thus inviting others to drop pretense. Great piece!

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  20. Such a wonderful personality. Knowing her can be most rewarding. Not easy to be just an ordinary soul but one that invites others to oneself without really trying. Wonderful write Jennifer!

    Hank

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  21. Beautifully crafted with clean and evocative images.

    Enjoyed the read!

    Best,
    Ana

    www.thedrugstorenotebook.co

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  22. As everyone else has said, a character we would all love to meet and talk with. So vividly brought to life in this poem. I especially like the opening and closing stanza.

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  23. Sounds like a great person... someone who makes others comfortable in their own skin is a person with a real gift. Beautifully written. :)

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  24. I would like to be her too. Lovely write.
    Anna :o]

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  25. She is wonderful! This is growing old gracefully in my book!

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  26. A lovely portrait of this woman, Jennifer. I would love to be her as well, minus the cigars.

    Pamela

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  27. you wrote a world, i entered... except for the cigars, i too could wish to be her

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  28. I can definitely see the allure she holds. all I need is an old wooden porch and several more years of smiling to deepen those groove lines. (I'm sure the grey will eventually come as well.)

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  29. Interesting woman, I love this piece.

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  30. Beautiful descriptive poem. :-) Your poem reminded me of my grandmother sitting at the porch, smoking her old fashioned cigarettes. :-)

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