You've created a fantastic visual image in this piece (that works beautifully with the artwork). . . the poignancy of the words you've chosen, I think, would resonate in many relationships.
Bedazzling this! I too am determined to write to an image of hers... I've just not found the time. LOVE IT - and congrats on being top three !!!! You deserve it.
and you only hope that in the end, it is worth it, you know...cause a house of cards so easily falls....nice form too jennifer...smiles.
ReplyDeleteReally well done with the prompt. Clever and meaningful and fun. Great title too. This is Karin from Manicddaily at Wordpress. K.
ReplyDeleteJennifer, this is marvelous - Fib plus prompt - and the line "chasing your wild wind" !
ReplyDeleteSometimes a house of cards is worth the risk...beautifully written Jennifer :)
ReplyDeleteNicely written; I like this very much.
ReplyDeletei love the risking all for a house of cards....brave and without compromise...a LOVE such attitude
ReplyDeleteBeautiful Jennifer!
ReplyDeleteReally beautifully done Jennifer!
ReplyDeleteYou've created a fantastic visual image in this piece (that works beautifully with the artwork). . . the poignancy of the words you've chosen, I think, would resonate in many relationships.
ReplyDeleteooh I like this. Been there.
ReplyDeleteI love the tightness of the poem, the way it hangs and the complimentary picture!
ReplyDeleteah, this is fabulous... and you have all made me fall in love with her art!
ReplyDeleteVery good double purpose. I loved those paintings but was drawing a blank on words.
ReplyDeletethis is so multi-layered within few words..a meaningful and memorable little gem, Jennifer, muchly adored..
ReplyDeleteWow, beautiful, and so courageous!
ReplyDeleteVery clever, Jennifer. I hope her risk is worth it. Smiles.
ReplyDeleterisking it all..I hope it works out..
ReplyDeleteevery moment is its own house of cards, changing with our mood
ReplyDeleteBedazzling this! I too am determined to write to an image of hers... I've just not found the time. LOVE IT - and congrats on being top three !!!! You deserve it.
ReplyDeleteNicely written glimpse into what's going on in the world you made up for her:)
ReplyDeleteWow Jennifer! This poem affected me on many levels~
ReplyDeleteI think I am playing that hand now~
I love this one :D
I hope you are doing better!
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I wanted to send you a link!
Oh, but you must! If the slightest chance presents itself, you must chase that house of cards.
ReplyDeleteLove it.
Your poem perfectly describes the photo, & better yet it only 18 words. Very original, Jennifer.
ReplyDeleteOh, this is amazing! Life is like living in a house of cards and waiting for it to crumble and fall...
ReplyDeleteAwesome take on the pic..:)
Well done!
Oh yes. I love this completely. Sweet piece of writing.
ReplyDeleteAlso,(excuse me please,it was last last night) A Super congratulations to you on your writing win!! :)
ReplyDeleteTotally love this...hope this house cards can stand tall.
ReplyDeleteThis is great :)
ReplyDeleteYou amaze me with all you packed into this short form...and such a perfect response to Judith's art.
ReplyDeleteThat house of cards is always a bad bet. Nicely done.
ReplyDeletePamela
Very creative!
ReplyDeleteWhen I wrote mine I hadn't even thought of writing a fibonacci.
ReplyDeleteThis is great. You covered the whole of the picture with so few words.
awesome!
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