You can hear them,
like little
ghosts
haunting the
air at night,
though we
don’t have
the blue note
whippoorwill
in our evergreens.
If you’ve ever
hummed a dry, lonesome aria
from your
own warbling wind struck throat
you can hear
them—
in the hollowed
out whisper-choke,
strummed endless
in black on wet pillowed nights,
haunted and
hidden.
Yes, you can
hear them, even here,
always, when
you’ve known lonely,
so ink-dark
and bled deep to bone.
Or maybe
they can hear you.
© 2013
Jennifer Wagner
At dVerse host Tony Maude has invited us to write to any
FFA or MTB prompt they’ve offered in the past.
I chose Victoria Slotto's Literary Allusion. One of my all time favorite short stories is
The Legend of Sleepy Hollow by Washington Irving. I also love the haunting song Midnight in Montgomery by Alan Jackson. Each work
references the beautifully eerie call of the nightjar bird, the Eastern Whip-poor-will. I have alluded to each
work in my piece. Happy year 3
dVerse!
Love that end..
ReplyDeleteI have always wanted to hear the night-jar... sounds like an interesting and eerie call that would make my night...
Deletedang...when you have known lonely...and humming an aria of the dry wind of your throat....def a haunting little verse...have you seen the promos for the new sleepy hollow tv show...not sure on that one...smiles....
ReplyDeletecool title, did not know that was another name for it...
so ink-dark and bled deep to bone....this is wonderful... loved the images in the second stanza as well much..and really makes me curious to check out the links as well...
ReplyDeleteI hear them in your poem, Jennifer. I really hear them!
ReplyDeleteBoth those stories are pretty dark - and you've kept that mood here, Jennifer. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteLove the ending!
ReplyDeletea bit of mystery wrapped around your lines.... at first it was someone's hand in a cookie jar... LOL
ReplyDeleteJennifer, this is so beautifully rendered. There's an eerie, yet peaceful play in this and I love the images you create. Kudos.
ReplyDeletewonderful play on the senses, Jen. I love Alan's song too.
ReplyDeleteAs I read, I immediately thought of the Hank Williams song. This is beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThis is great! I really enjoyed reading this.
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Some years ago, when I lived out in the woods, another nightjar species, the Chuck-will's widow, stayed in an old broken down oak tree 20 feet from the house. Every night during the summer I heard the mournful song. Thanks for reminding me of this, and for writing such a beautiful poem. Excellent!
ReplyDeleteThis is wonderful!! I love listening to birds on an otherwise calm night!! :-)
ReplyDeleteWonderfully haunting...Excellent lines, Excellent poetry. :)
ReplyDeleteLove the whole piece Jennifer ~ The twist in the ending was good & unexpected ~
ReplyDeleteBeautiful writing. Adore the phrase "so ink-dark and bled deep to bone". Raw and awesome.
ReplyDeleteI hear you.
ReplyDeleteSensitive characterization...awesome!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful Jennifer. We are what we read, and love, aren't we?
ReplyDeletehaunting & with a beautiful use of language - i especially like
ReplyDelete"If you’ve ever hummed a dry, lonesome aria
from your own warbling wind struck throat"
and the unexpectedness of the final line
Your ending liine was a punching end alright!
ReplyDelete"Yes, you can hear them, even here,
always, when you’ve known lonely,
so ink-dark and bled deep to bone.
Or maybe they can hear you."
This was by far the most poignant stanza...i love how you formulated it !
Beautiful poem!
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