That kiss just outside
the speakeasy
left me speechless.
It was dark inside, lit by candles,
and the heavy door, as an ancient time portal,
shut snug when we were ushered in.
I remember the way you looked at me,
and all the things you whispered,
sitting there caressing
my sandaled foot.
Afterward,
when we were left alone
to climb the hidden stair,
your hands were warm
and the stones cool
against my back.
You’ve always known what to say
and how to say it to me,
with your eyes dark,
glittering, cerulean coins—
and still now, in the corridor
to the dragon’s lair,
milky smoke rising from your nostrils,
leading me, willing sacrifice
in white velvet,
to everyday heaven.
© 2024 Jennifer Wagner
When you kiss the same guy for 26 years, and still want to.
Wow...how wonderful! Great poem!
ReplyDeleteA stunning poem about a special memory, Jennifer! I love the idea of the speakeasy’s ‘heavy door, as an ancient time portal, shut snug when we were ushered in’, and the ‘eyes dark, glittering, cerulean coins’.
ReplyDeleteI really love this, the thought of a speakeasy and such an encounter... or maybe the speakeasy is more a metaphor for a relationship of danger and bliss.
ReplyDeleteSimply a gorgeous sensual poem, Jennifer. You imply just enough and leave the rest to our imagination. I love these lines especially:
ReplyDelete"your eyes dark,
glittering, cerulean coins"
"leading me, willing sacrifice...
to everyday heaven."
What a mix of sensuality, intrigue and even some foreboding notes.
ReplyDelete26 years? Don't you have to stop for lunch or something? My idiocy aside, this is a gorgeous, sensuous poem and I envy you these moments which you have described with your usual deft touch, Jen. I had to search the Rokerij. It looks like just the setting for this!
ReplyDeleteSmoldering and sensual, I felt like I was being mesmerized along with the willing sacrifice. Ooh la la!
ReplyDeletebeautiful, as always. I esp. love the ending 'everyday heaven'.
ReplyDeleteYeah baby!
ReplyDeleteOoh...this is good. A touch of nostalgia and oozing with seduction. Love the phrase "everyday heaven".
ReplyDeleteLove this, Jennifer! The description of the eyes, the warmth and coolness.
ReplyDeleteAh! May the feeling forever remain fresh and new in both of your hearts.
ReplyDeleteSome sacrifice, still smoldering after all these years! 😀 Beautiful love song, Jennifer.
ReplyDeleteWhat a gorgeous, sensual write! I hear ya! 30 and going here sis! Love it.
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