How
we hated Lamonts,
my
aunt and I,
as
her sister—my mother,
her
mother—my grandma,
shopped
and tried
on
somebody else’s
soon-to-be
clothes.
It
was the smell,
we
said,
or
the way
it
made us feel
confined
or
defined
by
dress or bra or shoe.
And
leave to breathe,
fairly
sprinting to her car,
in
search of that bright patch of sky
that
agreed
we
were already enough.
© 2019
Jennifer Wagner
I love your ending the bright patch of sky and owning the magic-
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Beautiful~
Love it. A wonderful and authentic vignette. I can really picture it and though, I've never been to that particular store, I think (by your description) I could, probably, recognize it by the smell ~ smiles ~
ReplyDeleteYes, indeed -- I can definitely picture this whole scenario!!
ReplyDeleteSome childhood experiences haunt us forever.
ReplyDeleteBrilliant sketch / reminiscence.
ReplyDeleteI love the bright patch of sky, the sprint to the car - release into Being Enough. Cool!
ReplyDeletesuch a fine turn in the final stanza ~
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