The
river turned on her, angry.
Churning
water, debris
swirled
monstrous around her.
But
rivers have rocks,
and
in the middle,
“one
higher
than
I,” she told me.
She
climbed upon it,
stayed
to her knees, footing unsure.
And
the river became an ocean swelling,
spray
mighty. Flecks of sand stung her skin.
Winds
rushed. She closed her eyes.
It
raged— it drenched, it raged, raged—
and
receded. A parting of the sea.
And
she stood, unscathed,
though
not unaffected.
Chains,
foul and bound to her infected flesh,
infected
heart, had been torn away.
Miseries
vanished, banished
like
ghosts themselves spooked.
And
to the other side—she leapt
to
the meadow in sunlight
of
promises kept,
and
keeps
on
leaping
further,
farther,
now
she’s free.
© 2016 Jennifer Wagner
From the end of the
earth I will cry to You,
When my heart is overwhelmed;
Lead me to the rock that is higher than I.
When my heart is overwhelmed;
Lead me to the rock that is higher than I.
Psalm 61:2
I love your descriptive power. I felt the pull of the water and the could feel the desperation and fatigue. Yes, holding on through the storm, the raging river is possible when you hold one to the rock what is higher than I. I tend to read the Bible metaphorically, and you've applied it perfectly here. Yes, finally she's free. Thanks, Jennifer
ReplyDeleteJennifer, what a beautiful, powerful poem about clinging to our Jesus, the Rock.
ReplyDeleteThis is such a strong description, reminding me of some of those images I have in my head after reading of what happened after the great Tsunami in 2004... those who survived the river, and where saved.... but then there is the metaphor you reflect in the quote that make it even richer.
ReplyDeleteGreat writing, I love the vivid images! Nice work hun.
ReplyDeleteI love the redemption towards the end Jennifer ~ Such a joyous ending and that psalm is very inspiring ~ Have a good week ahead ~
ReplyDeleteAn eloquent narrative - beautifully drawn and stirring.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad she found that rock. A wonderfully penned poem on survivorship.
ReplyDeletethis also has echoes of Greek myth ~
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