Tuesday, February 10, 2015

Mariposa

I want to search your depths
and find veils
and smoke,
that will vanish at last in flame.
           --from Eve's Discourse, by Carilda Oliver Labra


Dormant
after first frost,
gypsy lips,
            volcanic
to your molten touch, erupt--

ignite the slumbering zest,
exotic scent,
hidden in white ginger flame,

burns us up
and leaves
            to ash
the petal nest
of our broken names.


We'll sleep like murderers
who've saved themselves
by bonding together in incomparable blossoming.
            --from Eve's Discourse, by Carilda Oliver Labra


© 2015 Jennifer Wagner

For the Sunday Mini-challenge at Imaginary Garden with Real Toads. Grace offered us the work of Cuban poet Carilda Oliver Labra for inspiration.

Mariposa is the national flower of Cuba (white ginger lily, “butterfly”).

21 comments:

  1. those last 2 lines....

    the petal nest
    of our broken names.

    dang.

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  2. Ah exactly those lines that Brain says for sure made me gasp... Better than the inspired poem IMHO

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  3. Gypsy lips, volcanic and that ending the petal nest of our broken names -
    Wow!

    Thanks for participating Jennifer and wishing you happy weekend ~

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  4. interesting use of collaborative verses; Thanks for dropping in to read mine

    much love

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  5. The petal nest of our broken names is a lovely combination of beginnings and disruptions--very cool. Thanks! K. (Manicddaily)

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  6. This poem takes the torch from Labra and runs with it in a way that is both faithful to the heart while wholly unique in the expression. A conflagration within a small, tidy space that is angelic in its smoke. A "white ginger flame" is both hot and aromatic -- touch of Eros, indeed. Very fine work.

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  7. Beautiful, Jennifer.

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  8. I love the senses you write to hear, the smells and delicate orderings that are the light we read each other by, and the passions that both burn and give light in turn. Your quotes from Labra bookend the poem perfectly.

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  9. You had me at gypsy lips and the ending-ka-pow~

    Love yours
    @>----------------

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  10. Wow! This is exquisite. The final stanza blew me away!

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  11. bookend quotes with a poem that is powerful! Love it.

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  12. Wooooh, I love this poem, it just sounds so great!

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  13. "burns us up
    and leaves
    to ash
    the petal nest
    of our broken names."…. gorgeous!

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  14. I seem to be in agreement with the others about my favorite lines. This is simply beautiful!

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  15. I agree as well about the favorite lines. Wow, a lot of zing in your poem.

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  16. Wonderful writing! You've captured the passionate contrasts of the original piece in this, Jennifer.

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  17. every match leaves ashes, doesn't it? stellar ~

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Thank you for your thoughts!