Swarthy, Silky, Smoky, Smooth
I’m a 95%-er when it comes to dark and
bitter. I’m your girl, so lay it on
me. You go on and have that cry; I’ll
hold your hand when the proverbial sh-t hits the industrial-size fan. Sometimes I go well with cream in the cup,
most times I don’t. I won’t sugarcoat—but
at least I won’t be bland. And you’ll
remember this night sexier, silkier than you expected. You’ll probably even wish daylight would
knock on someone else’s door for that early morning run you forgot you
committed to, choosing instead to let you stay wrapped up in sweet swarthiness,
letting you savor the last bit of darkness down to the last crumb, the last
drop.
smoky
coffee, dense chocolate
how
such dark things
can
make me feel so light
©
2026 Jennifer Wagner
dVerse Poetics:
Comfort Food
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"smoky coffee, dense chocolate
ReplyDeletehow such dark things
can make me feel so light" absolutely perfect!! well done!
Jennifer I love the texture in this piece some great descriptive words and love how you find comfort in the intense and the un-diluted - so relatable 🙌
ReplyDeleteWhen I was younger, I didn’t like coffee or dark chocolate, but my taste has changed over the years, which is why your haibun appeals to me, Jennifer. I agree with Ange. Great sibilant title, I would choose to ‘stay wrapped up in sweet swarthiness’, and I love the contrast of dark and light in the haiku.
ReplyDelete'to let you stay wrapped up in sweet swarthiness' and 'how such dark things can make me feel so light' Perfect, love the imagery and those lines.
ReplyDeleteJennifer I prefer medium roast Colombian and milk chocolate, but it's still twanging on that string, YUM.
ReplyDeleteVery nice, always good to have that one friend that can cope. Love the haiku.
ReplyDeletePerfection, Jennifer!❤️ After reading your sensory haibun now I am craving a cuppa.
ReplyDeleteI love the double chocolate / double & triple entendre nature of this clever writing.
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely relished the pleasurable subject of this poem, Jennifer, on every level. A haibun for the ages --- and the senses. 🙂
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