Tuesday, March 24, 2026

Swarthy, Silky, Smoky, Smooth


 

I’m a 95%-er when it comes to dark and bitter.  I’m your girl, so lay it on me.  You go on and have that cry; I’ll hold your hand when the proverbial sh-t hits the industrial-size fan.  Sometimes I go well with cream in the cup, most times I don’t.  I won’t sugarcoat—but at least I won’t be bland.  And you’ll remember this night sexier, silkier than you expected.  You’ll probably even wish daylight would knock on someone else’s door for that early morning run you forgot you committed to, choosing instead to let you stay wrapped up in sweet swarthiness, letting you savor the last bit of darkness down to the last crumb, the last drop.

 

smoky coffee, dense chocolate

how such dark things

can make me feel so light

 

 

 

© 2026 Jennifer Wagner

 

dVerse Poetics: Comfort Food

 


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9 comments:

  1. "smoky coffee, dense chocolate
    how such dark things
    can make me feel so light" absolutely perfect!! well done!

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  2. Jennifer I love the texture in this piece some great descriptive words and love how you find comfort in the intense and the un-diluted - so relatable 🙌

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  3. When I was younger, I didn’t like coffee or dark chocolate, but my taste has changed over the years, which is why your haibun appeals to me, Jennifer. I agree with Ange. Great sibilant title, I would choose to ‘stay wrapped up in sweet swarthiness’, and I love the contrast of dark and light in the haiku.

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  4. 'to let you stay wrapped up in sweet swarthiness' and 'how such dark things can make me feel so light' Perfect, love the imagery and those lines.

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  5. Jennifer I prefer medium roast Colombian and milk chocolate, but it's still twanging on that string, YUM.

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  6. Very nice, always good to have that one friend that can cope. Love the haiku.

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  7. Perfection, Jennifer!❤️ After reading your sensory haibun now I am craving a cuppa.

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  8. I love the double chocolate / double & triple entendre nature of this clever writing.

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  9. Absolutely relished the pleasurable subject of this poem, Jennifer, on every level. A haibun for the ages --- and the senses. 🙂

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