Friday, February 6, 2026

Gettin' Fresh, Like Grandma Used to Say

 


 

When I woke up this morning,

those fresh-baked Ghirardelli brownies

began whispering things to me.

 

Things only my husband should say

to me in the dark

or like

when I woke up this morning.

 

They turned poetic, Neruda-esque,

I want to do with you what spring does with the cherry trees,”

intoned

those fresh-baked Ghirardelli brownies

 

from their sugary-rich depths,

so silky-smooth, while I innocently sipped coffee. 

So velvety they were indeed, so fresh, when they

began whispering things to me.

                                                                                                 

© 2026 Jennifer Wagner

 

A Cascade Poem for dVerse MTB

The challenge didn’t specifically state that all stanzas must have an equal number of lines (tercets, etc.) so I took a bit of creative cascade license. 


“I want to do with you what spring does with the cherry trees.  Quiero hacer contigo lo que la primavera hace con los cerezos.”  – Pablo Neruda, from “Every Day You Play.”

 

image generated by me using substack image generator 

 

7 comments:

  1. Hahahaha--love this, Jennifer! I especially like the third stanza. And, I might need to get out my Ghirardelli chocolate today and whip up a pan of brownies. 😉

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  2. Gotta go bake somethin' now I'm hearin' things! 😂

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  3. Delicious and romantic - love it.

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  4. I can hear that chocolate is warm and irresistible!

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  5. I love the thought of chocolate whispering.

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  6. Now I must bake some brownies and wait for them to whisper sweet nothings to me!
    Gotta love this fab cascade, Jennifer! ❤️

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