Wednesday, October 1, 2025

Loon Lake

 

The three of us,

with the late afternoon sun

in our hair,

semi-stuck in the reeds,

using paddles to try to turn

that little pedal boat around,

our laughter

catching the ears of teen boys

who came to give us a push—

 

where did we each end up—

different places,

but still,

the three of us,

nudged by

wind, water, sun,

 

have memory

of the last golden glint

of rowing together

in a coming-of-age summer,

and the haunting song

of loons on the lake

here and gone.

 

 

© 2025 Jennifer Wagner

 

dVerse Poetics

 

4 comments:

  1. Jennifer - I loved the song your paddle sings of past memories filled with laughter, sun and fun. Then the nudge of change by wind, water and sun. Sounds like a glorious time.

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  2. Oh this is lovely. You took me right back there with you - a laughter-filled coming of age moment forever golden. Just lovely.

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  3. Oh my that is just delightful, a captured echo...stunning

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  4. What a wonderful poem reflecting those moments and feelings of growing up - but still, hopefully experiencing joys and fond memories

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