Saturday, August 24, 2024

Alone, But Not

 

There are no rules.

 

But there are,

aren’t there?

 

When nothing hurts worse

than breathing

in,

out,

in, out.

 

When my days are all

fogged-up

like the windows

of the pickup truck

I borrowed

to get to work

in the rain

 

when I decided I was going

to keep going.

 

To breathe

in,

out,

in, out.

 

And keep moving forward—

 

to pick up my son at daycare,

to make dinner,

and go to bed

 

saving my trips

to the abandoned churchyard

where I screamed

with only God listening

for later.

 

I know there are rules.

 

Remember

the magpies, the only things

in black and white,

where we searched

for the perfect fishing spot?

 

But it wasn’t perfect,

was it?

 

Fish were caught,

but every step was steep

on the way down,

on the way up.

One slip—

 

And now, how

we feel like fakes

 

after so many years

of victories

in our pockets,

or wearing them

like badges,

 

we’re shaken like game dice

held in a dixie cup

 

and rolled out,

in,

out,

in, out.

 

It’s a game of numbers,

they tell us,

and we keep moving forward,

 

as our old answers

seem puny

 

against this storm,

playing chicken

with the rules,

 

navigating

with no one listening

but God.

 

 

© 2024 Jennifer Wagner

 

 

Late to Shay’s Word List Party at the Word Garden

 

3 comments:

  1. I'm always blown away by you - seriously. How you do what you do I have no idea. Your words, thoughts and heart laid open on paper and pen. One of my greatest joys is being in the front row watching a masterpiece played out in life. "We got this!"

    In the night we shall go in
    to steal
    a flowering branch.

    We shall climb over the wall
    in the darkness of the alien garden,
    two shadows in the shadow.

    Winter is not yet gone,
    and the apple tree appears
    suddenly changed
    into a cascade of fragrant stars.

    in the night we shall go in
    up to its trembling firmament,
    and your little hands and mine
    will steal the stars.

    And silently,
    to our house,
    in the night and the shadow,
    with your steps will enter
    perfume's silent step
    and with starry feet
    the clear body of spring

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  2. Oh, could I ever vibe with this one, Jennifer. It makes me think of a time during my marriage when we were helping feed the homeless for a week at a local church. I remarked to my ex that all the other people helping seemed to feel like "isn't it nice that we're helping these poor homeless people" while I felt like we were all just a bad break away from being the helped, not the helpers. Shake that Dixie cup. And another thing I learned from my married years--following the rules is overrated.

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  3. I suspect we're on our own here - our own spectator. which, in a way, is empowering - we have the ability to craft , as you do here, a way to channel that pain the narrator describes into a thing of beauty - this poem ~

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