mapping the stars
on my back
you don’t ask me
for anything—
and let me cry
to forget what’s happened
between now
and the last good year
you don’t ask
for anything—so i can
remember how
to give the stars their names again
© 2023 Jennifer Wagner
for dverse quadrille #175: craft a poem in exactly 44 words using some form of the word “map”
Oh, Jennifer. This is simply breathtaking. That last line! Just stunning!
ReplyDeleteBittersweet and beautiful ~~~~
ReplyDeleteI love the way you describe such loss, the time between, and that stunning end... maybe we cannot pretend that we have any stars to name...
ReplyDeleteOne of my favorites. I can feel the ache, passion and story. Wonderful.
ReplyDeleteDeep, and lovely.
ReplyDeleteTo convey so much in so few words is your rare skill.
ReplyDeletedelicate yet so powerful. that's the kind of friend to have. one who is there but not intrusive
ReplyDeleteBeautiful and heartfelt writing. So happy to read you again.
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