From
the window of the Moon Tree,
the
marina is desolate—
a
glum fairy tale with a solitary gull
poised
to flee.
A
police boat and whale watching
tour
arrives, more guests
than
would be expected today.
We
sample tapas,
eavesdrop
on a first date.
He’s
an author,
questions
spirituality,
says
if it’s real, then it must be
the
same for everyone.
She
doesn’t say much,
laughs
politely here and there.
You
start mouthing to the sounds
of
a synthpop tune, and it’s too funny.
I
laugh for several uncontrollable minutes.
Later,
I tell you
the
whale cruise
offered
me a job once.
You
ask why I turned it down,
and
say we should
pretend
like it’s our first date
the
next time we go out, just for fun.
Except,
of course, the polite laughing.
©
2017 Jennifer Wagner
Truly a glum fairy tale outside these days! Are you free next Friday? I happen to know a nice place...
ReplyDeleteoh the last line made ME laugh...
ReplyDeleteWell composed. The last line caught me completely off guard.
ReplyDeleteHa.. I think the polite laughing will be impossible to pretend... I guess the author will have problem with a second date.
ReplyDeleteBrilliantly sketched! The close on this is pure mirth ... the perceptive quip and its placement. You know what they say about humor: it's all in the timing. And you nailed it!
ReplyDeleteSounds like you both made the best fun out of a glummy place ~ At another date and season, perhaps it would looking better ~
ReplyDeleteI like this. It's always good to go on "first dates" with one's spouse.
ReplyDelete__ We see and hear and think... then create value.
ReplyDeleteinner smile
the surge felt in my eyelids
further steps
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What a treat! A deliciously enjoyable read.
ReplyDeletechuckling. lucky man, your date, the chance to make you laugh :) ~
ReplyDeleteHi Jennifer. I could really picture all of this happening. You painted the setting and characters so clearly. I enjoyed being allowed to be part of the hidden audience on that first date. Happy Easter, David.
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