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a love note/poem from my hubby
via refrigerator magnets
photo © 2013 jennifer wagner
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a soft tangerine moon
glows there
where i put my hand
over your heart,
feel
your breath slow and even
chest rising, falling
rising, falling
and i can’t catch
myself, either—
from drifting off
into the green poem
of us
where
you
lift me up to the
branches
to catch my footing,
where
the
light shines through
its trembling leaves.
i hold them tight,
let the sun play in
angled drops
on my face, close my
eyes to
feel the favor
of your smile,
and then open them
again
to focus
on eden appearing,
in the closing
of the blue distance.
© 2013 Jennifer
Wagner
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25 comments:
Love the romanticism here. So beautiful.
being a soppy old romantic I loved this... :)
the green poem of us...smiles..still growing...i love the extended metaphor in this...the lifting up to get the footing....the ref to eden...beautiful love poem....smiles.
Aww so sweet ... fridge note & your poem. :)
These lines are transcendental! I feel as if I am being lifted as a candy fluff into realms where everything to sweet and wonderful. Only the Fairies are missing. Beautiful.
What a beautiful note from your husband...Your poem is beautiful also...Such peace and love...I needed this tonight.
A beautiful ode - lyrical - reminiscent of a number of French impressionists paintings that I love.
Such a beautiful love poem - just the right amount of tenderness and sweetness.
smiles... ~
very lovely....
so very lovely!
bliss indeed
how I love, love
A tender poem full of emotions...liked the magnet message..how thoughtful..
What beautiful imagery, here, Jennifer. I really enjoyed the idea of Eden (and all of its symbolism) appearing!
Ahhh...very lovely...beautiful love poem and so gorgeous your message was, so heartwarming to see and read this poem. :)
how cool is that... and love the can't catching yourself from drifting into the green poem of us...and what a place to fall into....love it
So beautiful and aesthetic that it ruses a deep embedded feeling inside me..tangerine moon, green poem, blue distance, angled sun..well beyond what anyone can imagine.. :)
Sigh. Beautiful. sentiments & words.
tangerine moon, feel the favor in your smile..smiles. My favorite lines in this.
Sweet love note. I had just recently seen a short film about those magnets.. I like the idea.
Lila
So many lovely images of love.. I really like how you used colors to express the feelings... glorious...
That's really sweet and heartfelt. I like it.
You made me smile ....a sweet poem!
What a beautiful, romantic love poem - and the firdge magnet not is pretty special too ... smiles
What a sweet and well penned poem and your close is just beautiful.
Very beautiful! pleasant feeling reading it!
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