Wednesday, April 23, 2025

This Poem Is in Disguise

 

This poem is a bowl of cereal

with mostly milk left inside.

 

This poem smells like sweaty socks.

 

This poem learned how to ride a bike,

pick up a pen, how to read a story,

make scrambled eggs.

 

This poem dented the car with aforementioned bike.

 

This poem broke the upstairs window

with an arrow.

 

This poem left marks on the wall.

 

This poem knows how to shave,

leaves clippings in the sink,

and sometimes wears a beard.

 

This poem still rests its head on my knees.

 

This poem is a bowl of cereal

with mostly milk left inside.

 

This poem sits on the table

making a ring

around my heart.

 

 

© 2025 Jennifer Wagner

 

Inspired by Sherry’s prompt at What’s Going On?  My poem is inspired by the Boomerang Metaphor form she references but does not adhere to its rules.

Day 23 of NPM

13 comments:

  1. Beautiful. You're amazing

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  2. Oh, I love this so much, especially the head on your knees and the ring around your heart. Beautiful.

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  3. This is a lovely. I enjoyed it a lot. Suzanne - Wayfaring - Wordpress

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  4. Despite the various 'mishaps' shared in this poem, I can feel the love in the words. Beautiful poem, so well written.

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  5. "This poem still rests its head on my knees." and well it should! It has broken and messed up things. It's probably dangerous, but it has a tender heart! I'd like to be a a poetry reading with this poem.

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  6. Sweet! From the title to the finish.

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  7. Oh, I love this. Your ending brought tears, joyful tears.

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  8. Sometimes poems do come in disguise. I enjoyed the reference of the bowl of cereal with only milk remaining. I thought about alphabet cereal and I wanted to form the word poem with the letters.

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  9. Such tender and loving imagery - beautiful - Jae

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  10. Beautiful and love:
    'This poem is a bowl of cereal
    with mostly milk left inside.

    This poem sits on the table
    making a ring
    around my heart.'

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  11. "This poem dented the car with aforementioned bike." Ha. Poetry is everything happening around us, as you say in your delightful lines.

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Thank you for your thoughts!