I LOVE the chatter of chickadees! Your delightful haiku takes me back to the East Coast, where there were chickadees in abundance. Sadly, there are none here in the depths of the Sonoran Desert. Thank you for this little trip down memory lane...with some of my favorite birds!
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Sweet! I hear them too, along with the white throated sparrow and her lovely song.
I adore this haiku. The C sounds give it such a lilt. I feel like I'm taking a walk with you.
I know I've taken that walk many times - on foot and in my mind. Smiles
Perfectly wonderful haiku! I've had those cheery little birds chatter my arrival too!
sweet brown chickadee
feathers ruffled, throat stretched
sings morning anthem
I LOVE the chatter of chickadees! Your delightful haiku takes me back to the East Coast, where there were chickadees in abundance. Sadly, there are none here in the depths of the Sonoran Desert. Thank you for this little trip down memory lane...with some of my favorite birds!
Mary in Disguise
You are a master wordsmith...choosing the perfect sound to paint the picture♥
What a brilliant haiku! Your words show us the scene completely.
Noisy little critters, aren't they?
Last Night’s Tea Flowers
I can hear him and see him! Beautiful! Thank you for this chattering birdsong that says you are indeed here!
smiles Wendy...I knew you would have!
They are delightful--thanks Barbara!
aw, nice haiku!
...and they are so cute too! Glad I could take you there.
What a lovely compliment, thank you!
Thank you very much!
They are enjoyable to me-thanks Mark.
Thanks Lea! Glad you enjoyed this little piece of the forest :)
imaginative haiku... very vivid.. thumbs up
Thanks much :)
just love this vivid haiku, Jennifer!can almost hear the chatter :)
Thanks for reading it yelena, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
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