Thursday, December 6, 2012

Forest



chestnut-backed chickadee
on the hemlock branch
chatters my arrival



Copyright 2012 Jennifer Wagner

for haiku my heart friday at recuerda mi corazon

22 comments:

Delphyne said...

Sweet! I hear them too, along with the white throated sparrow and her lovely song.

Fran aka Redondowriter said...

I adore this haiku. The C sounds give it such a lilt. I feel like I'm taking a walk with you.

Wendy Bourke said...

I know I've taken that walk many times - on foot and in my mind. Smiles

Barbara said...

Perfectly wonderful haiku! I've had those cheery little birds chatter my arrival too!

Meri said...

sweet brown chickadee
feathers ruffled, throat stretched
sings morning anthem

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

I LOVE the chatter of chickadees! Your delightful haiku takes me back to the East Coast, where there were chickadees in abundance. Sadly, there are none here in the depths of the Sonoran Desert. Thank you for this little trip down memory lane...with some of my favorite birds!

Mary in Disguise

Priti Lisa said...

You are a master wordsmith...choosing the perfect sound to paint the picture♥

Anonymous said...

What a brilliant haiku! Your words show us the scene completely.

Mark said...

Noisy little critters, aren't they?

Last Night’s Tea Flowers

Lea said...

I can hear him and see him! Beautiful! Thank you for this chattering birdsong that says you are indeed here!

Jennifer Wagner said...

smiles Wendy...I knew you would have!

Jennifer Wagner said...

They are delightful--thanks Barbara!

Jennifer Wagner said...

aw, nice haiku!

Jennifer Wagner said...

...and they are so cute too! Glad I could take you there.

Jennifer Wagner said...

What a lovely compliment, thank you!

Jennifer Wagner said...

Thank you very much!

Jennifer Wagner said...

They are enjoyable to me-thanks Mark.

Jennifer Wagner said...

Thanks Lea! Glad you enjoyed this little piece of the forest :)

Deepak Kripal said...

imaginative haiku... very vivid.. thumbs up

Jennifer Wagner said...

Thanks much :)

blueness said...

just love this vivid haiku, Jennifer!can almost hear the chatter :)

Jennifer Wagner said...

Thanks for reading it yelena, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)