Thursday, December 6, 2012

Forest



chestnut-backed chickadee
on the hemlock branch
chatters my arrival



Copyright 2012 Jennifer Wagner

for haiku my heart friday at recuerda mi corazon

22 comments:

  1. Sweet! I hear them too, along with the white throated sparrow and her lovely song.

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  2. I adore this haiku. The C sounds give it such a lilt. I feel like I'm taking a walk with you.

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  3. I know I've taken that walk many times - on foot and in my mind. Smiles

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  4. Perfectly wonderful haiku! I've had those cheery little birds chatter my arrival too!

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  5. sweet brown chickadee
    feathers ruffled, throat stretched
    sings morning anthem

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  6. I LOVE the chatter of chickadees! Your delightful haiku takes me back to the East Coast, where there were chickadees in abundance. Sadly, there are none here in the depths of the Sonoran Desert. Thank you for this little trip down memory lane...with some of my favorite birds!

    Mary in Disguise

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    1. ...and they are so cute too! Glad I could take you there.

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  7. You are a master wordsmith...choosing the perfect sound to paint the picture♥

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  8. What a brilliant haiku! Your words show us the scene completely.

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  9. I can hear him and see him! Beautiful! Thank you for this chattering birdsong that says you are indeed here!

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    1. Thanks Lea! Glad you enjoyed this little piece of the forest :)

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  10. imaginative haiku... very vivid.. thumbs up

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  11. just love this vivid haiku, Jennifer!can almost hear the chatter :)

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    1. Thanks for reading it yelena, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

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