write
me a song
with
your eyes
like
you do
hang
up your helmet,
your
axe,
come
home
to
me
©
2015 Jennifer Wagner
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© 2015 Jennifer Wagner
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Two
tenWord poems. Over at dVerse this week we were offered to play with
the tenWord form. These two can be read together as one little love poem.
For
Ian,
for
Poets U,
and
for all the spouses of firefighters...may the hours quicken!
26 comments:
smiles...my grandfather was a fireman...when he passed he was given full honors...one of the most vivid memories of my childhood...and one reason i always have such great respect for firefighters....
nothing better than coming home after a hard day's work to someone who really really cares...
Oh, the best songs are those that are written with someone's eyes. No more beautiful melody than that!
I love the poem and photo ~ how sweet! Firemen are heroes indeed ~ you must be proud :)
I can only imagine.. the anxiousness in waiting.. for a fireman there should be a home like this waiting... and a song after the terrors of the day is always the best.
Well written/lament.
ZQ
So lovely!
Simple, heartfelt and deep short prayer that speaks so strongly the man in your life, Jennifer - hard to improve upon, I would have thought... With Best Wishes Scott www.scotthastie.com
Ahhh! I love love poems, and this one says it all so economically.
This is very heartfelt, romantic....the simplicity of it paired with the photo is so lovely.
What a welcome. May we all feel so loved.
Very sweet is the homecoming, I am sure ~ Love the 10 word offering, smiles ~
So simple. Equally sexy. Raw and real.
Oh I swooned with that first line....loved it!
such a sweet sentiment!!
A lovely write. :-)
-HA
I can imagine the special happiness at having him come home. I loved this poem.
Coming home to your warm smile and twinkling eyes is perhaps one of the greatest joys in my life.
How wonderfully effective...
short but effective love poem. excellent! :)
I do like how you've put your 2 TenWords together here!
So lovely, especially your opening!
Grand feelings... deeply absorbed. _m
Wonderful! Reads like the close of a chapter . . . in a love story.
Yes, those gone off pull us with them.
powerful ~
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