I
won't play your eggshell game.
It's a
drag
and
you can't hold me hostage
anymore
from
who I am,
from
who I am meant to be,
from
happiness.
Honestly,
it's rude,
and
you continue to behave childishly,
demanding
things
on
your own selfish terms.
Meanwhile,
I am
making new loves
and
they don't require that I tiptoe,
they
say,
give
it all you got, girl,
go
ahead,
crunch.
©
2015 Jennifer Wagner
For Poetry Jam: One Word. My word is “Freedom,” written about
obliquely.
What a wonderful take on "freedom" - give it all you got girl!
ReplyDeleteGreat choice of word, Jennifer! It is absolutely awful to be around people who make you feel you are constantly walking on eggshells.
ReplyDeleteThis poem is very empowering, Jennifer! No need for tip-toeing with people who know and like you like you are.
ReplyDeletewhat a lovely word "freedom" so "give it all you got, girl,"
ReplyDeleteHappy New Year Wishes
much love...
Love it, that word crunch really makes it and freedom it such a amazing word. I love this and the power that just seeps through every word.
ReplyDeleteYup ... smash those eggshells, girl! It's really very liberating, isn't it ?! Happy New Year!
ReplyDeleteNo more walking on eggshells--go crunch and be yourself! Thanks for posting.
ReplyDeleteYes! Not having to walk on eggshells is a wonderful expression of freedom. Crunch, crunch, crunch - Freedom isn't always quiet. Then again, it doesn't have to be.
ReplyDeleteYes, one sets the pace. Not to be goaded into funny things by others. Great anticipation for a great year ahead! Wonderful thoughts Jennifer!
ReplyDeleteHank
Yes freedom always stirs up some noise
ReplyDeleteugh. i hate th eggshell game...always wondering if you will step on one....afraid...you can not live that way...and it only sucks the life out of you....
ReplyDeleteLOVE THE ATTITUDE HERE :)
ReplyDeleteYes! No eggshells. Crunch away-- that was an excellent ending :-)
ReplyDeleteI admire this line very much: give it all you've got ~ Crunch away, I say ~
ReplyDeleteWishing you Happy New Year Jennifer ~
"Go ahead, crunch." I love it!
ReplyDeleteI love the strength in this. "Give it all you've got!" Yes!
ReplyDeleteGive it all you've got . . . oh yes. Great word you've chosen.
ReplyDeleteI think it is very important for people to realize their strengths, whether someone is dragging them down or not, because it is that kind of strong motivation towards self-awareness that helps people through every day and all the struggles that may come with it. Great poem Jen!
ReplyDeleteCreative, poignant, and I love the last word!
ReplyDeletegood. ~
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