Thursday, June 20, 2013

Yuunagi



evening lull
the steady creak – creak – creak
of the porch swing


© 2013  Jennifer Wagner

13 comments:

Mark said...

Yes, yes, yes! Delightful little snippet of life you've shared with us in this handful of words.

Evening Lull

Janet Martin said...

sigh. one of the best sounds in the world!

ayala said...

Sweet :)

Maggie Grace said...

Delightful lull! Wish I had a swinging seat but need a patio or deck first.

Anonymous said...

Oh this is just an exquisite little haiku and a perfect response to the prompt!!! Bravo!Evening Lull

Brian Miller said...

ha. cool sound....my first thought of creak was the burbling kind...sounds like a peaceful night on the porch

Lolly said...

as always, just beautiful.

Anonymous said...

Just brilliant!

Yuunagi Uluru

Magyar said...

at day's close
this sun hides beyond the hills
doves pray

_m

Chèvrefeuille said...

A true evening lull PoetLaundry, thank you for sharing a little piece of your life.

Anonymous said...

a wonderful lull

brudberg said...

wonderful.. a porch swing sounds so nice. but I think it would find rare use here...

joanne said...

as the swing sways, the day unwinds....beautiful