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© 2013 Jennifer Wagner
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Speak soft-
petaled
twilight
against my
shoulders, tanned
and salty,
from a day rippling
with sun.
Envelop me,
with your mouth, cool
with mint
and cucumber,
our purpling
kiss,
perfumed.
©
2013 Jennifer Wagner
31 comments:
sensual, perfectly summer: a delicious sip ~ M
Oooh...left me entranced....Simply beautiful!! :))
Very sensual and pleasing.
Lovely! The form works really well, too.
hmmm...nice...love the tender sensuality in this...the scents, freshness of mint.. you make the butterfly sing beautifully
"petaled twilight" !! That is just perfect.
Beautifully sensual.
What a sweet small piece of earth in season.>KB
The kiss,love closing.Enjoyed what you drew with the form.
I fixed the typo...arghh...I hate those! I'm surprised no one said anything...y'all are too polite lol ;-)
oo la la...i like...nice contrast between the heat of the sun and the cool of the mouth...they both will get you to sweat though...ha...smiles.
Beautiful words, Jennifer. Delicate - yet sumptuous.
A very sensual cinquain, Jennifer.
Pamela
A lovely poem form..filled with sensuality..
So delicate and lovely like a butterfly!My Heart is Beating with Wishes
Lovely and nice contrast between your skin, the heat with the cool petaled perfumed kiss.
I love that purpling and perfumed kiss ~ Heady words ~ Lovely work with the form too ~
Gorgeous, Jen. :)
I didn't notice a typo earlier! I guess I was too busy soaking in the beauty of the image and words. :)
Very summery and alive. I like it.
Ohhh how gorgeous... speechless just adore this and how it makes me feel! :)
Perfect for one of the summer days! Sensuously beautiful Jennifer!
Hank
It tingles!
Simply enchanting, just reading this on a rainy day makes me feel like I am there basking in the sun.
A purpled kiss.. could it be better... great cinquain with summer and love in it...
Relaxing, wish I was away in the sun with someone... Beautiful poetry!
This is lovely !!!
Sorry to have missed your recent work. This is a beauty in words and the senses :)
how I loved the freshness of this... lovely read
I have a soft spot for cinquains and variations of them; this one is really good. I especially like the way the two wings of the butterfly contrast with each other in their imagery, but end up hot ... smiles
...what an excellent end Jennifer... purpling kiss perfumed... loved it... smiles...
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