Thursday, June 20, 2013

Yuunagi



evening lull
the steady creak – creak – creak
of the porch swing


© 2013  Jennifer Wagner

12 comments:

  1. Yes, yes, yes! Delightful little snippet of life you've shared with us in this handful of words.

    Evening Lull

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  2. sigh. one of the best sounds in the world!

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  3. Delightful lull! Wish I had a swinging seat but need a patio or deck first.

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  4. Oh this is just an exquisite little haiku and a perfect response to the prompt!!! Bravo!Evening Lull

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  5. ha. cool sound....my first thought of creak was the burbling kind...sounds like a peaceful night on the porch

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  6. at day's close
    this sun hides beyond the hills
    doves pray

    _m

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  7. A true evening lull PoetLaundry, thank you for sharing a little piece of your life.

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  8. a wonderful lull

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  9. wonderful.. a porch swing sounds so nice. but I think it would find rare use here...

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  10. as the swing sways, the day unwinds....beautiful

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