you said,
no one ever believed in you quite like me
you said,
you found the seashell as you ran on the beach
and kept it in your pocket
to give it to me
you said,
i made you want to lay down
on the tracks of a speeding locomotive
and beg for my love
i said,
yes
Copyright © 2013 Jennifer Wagner
For Ian. I was made to believe in you…15 years. I still have the shell.
39 comments:
Thank you... I still remember the first time I saw your bright brown eyes smiling up at me from across your desk
- and knew I was done for.
This is very sweet & wonderful.
Love this love story. Nice one and congratulations on 15 years. Celebrating 18 tonight with my wife :-)
so-o-o romantic<3 here's to 15 more! Hubby and I are going for 25 in June.
Wow so nice, after reading all these love poems I feel a little giddy lol.
Love this!
beg and say yes, that's what love is all about
journey with a new friend
Isn't it wonderful when the heart says yes!
Ideal.
and blessed, both.
Thank you for sharing, Jennifer.
big smiles...now that is some powerful kinda love...love hte magic in small things like the shell...and laying down on train tracks...dang...smiles...glad you said yes...
liked the struggle here and loved the ending
I find this very sweet ~ May your love shine ever brighter as the years go by ~
Happy Hearts Day ~
*sniff* That's unbelievably sweet.
So sweet and endearing!
Beautiful!
Happy <3 Day to you!
This is incredibly romantic :)
I'll never forget it. You captured me...and still do...
Congrats on 18 David! :-)
Awesome! Our anniversary is in July, but Valentine's Day was our first date. Congrats to you :-)
Me too lol.
Thanks!
Thanks for reading!
When it is a good thing, yes!
Thanks Kim. Congrats on 32 to you :)
He is a romantic...glad I said yes too! Happy day to you Brian :-)
Thank you very much.
Thank you for that wish Grace...happy day to you as well...
Thanks Fireblossom :-)
Thank you Ella! :-)
Thank you Keith :)
yay that you still have the shell =)
Well of course you said yes! And of course you still have the shell. :) I loved reading this - a wealth of love and history, and not a wasted word in either the story or the poem.
Yep :)
Thanks so much Rosemary! :)
Very, very well done, this Valentine :)
lovely! short and sweet for a long and a happy life of togetherness!
Thank you :)
I'll take that wish! Thank you Akila.
This is a wonderful romantic piece...a loving tribute:-))
Thanks for reading :)
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