you said,
no one ever believed in you quite like me
you said,
you found the seashell as you ran on the beach
and kept it in your pocket
to give it to me
you said,
i made you want to lay down
on the tracks of a speeding locomotive
and beg for my love
i said,
yes
Copyright © 2013 Jennifer Wagner
For Ian. I was made to believe in you…15 years. I still have the shell.
Thank you... I still remember the first time I saw your bright brown eyes smiling up at me from across your desk
ReplyDelete- and knew I was done for.
I'll never forget it. You captured me...and still do...
DeleteThis is very sweet & wonderful.
ReplyDeleteLove this love story. Nice one and congratulations on 15 years. Celebrating 18 tonight with my wife :-)
ReplyDeleteCongrats on 18 David! :-)
Deleteso-o-o romantic<3 here's to 15 more! Hubby and I are going for 25 in June.
ReplyDeleteAwesome! Our anniversary is in July, but Valentine's Day was our first date. Congrats to you :-)
DeleteWow so nice, after reading all these love poems I feel a little giddy lol.
ReplyDeleteMe too lol.
DeleteLove this!
ReplyDeleteThanks!
Deletebeg and say yes, that's what love is all about
ReplyDeletejourney with a new friend
Thanks for reading!
DeleteIsn't it wonderful when the heart says yes!
ReplyDeleteWhen it is a good thing, yes!
DeleteIdeal.
ReplyDeleteand blessed, both.
Thank you for sharing, Jennifer.
Thanks Kim. Congrats on 32 to you :)
Deletebig smiles...now that is some powerful kinda love...love hte magic in small things like the shell...and laying down on train tracks...dang...smiles...glad you said yes...
ReplyDeleteHe is a romantic...glad I said yes too! Happy day to you Brian :-)
Deleteliked the struggle here and loved the ending
ReplyDeleteThank you very much.
DeleteI find this very sweet ~ May your love shine ever brighter as the years go by ~
ReplyDeleteHappy Hearts Day ~
Thank you for that wish Grace...happy day to you as well...
Delete*sniff* That's unbelievably sweet.
ReplyDeleteThanks Fireblossom :-)
DeleteSo sweet and endearing!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful!
Happy <3 Day to you!
Thank you Ella! :-)
DeleteThis is incredibly romantic :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Keith :)
Deleteyay that you still have the shell =)
ReplyDeleteYep :)
DeleteWell of course you said yes! And of course you still have the shell. :) I loved reading this - a wealth of love and history, and not a wasted word in either the story or the poem.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Rosemary! :)
DeleteVery, very well done, this Valentine :)
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
Deletelovely! short and sweet for a long and a happy life of togetherness!
ReplyDeleteI'll take that wish! Thank you Akila.
DeleteThis is a wonderful romantic piece...a loving tribute:-))
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading :)
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