Wednesday, May 22, 2013

Midnight



barefoot on the lawn
the midnight moon and i
traipsing the dark



© 2013 Jennifer Wagner


15 comments:

Brian Miller said...

i love being barefoot in the grass...
under the moonlight, makes it all the more magical...walking with the moon...nice

Sadia Khan said...

World's most amazing feeling, loved it Jennifer :)

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

I love how you used traipsing in this haiku!

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Anonymous said...

Love barefoot in the grass... especially in moonlight :)

Chèvrefeuille said...

Barefoot oh yeah that's the way we all should go. I like walking barefoot through Mother Earth's Nature. Nicely written haiku Jennifer.

Maggie Grace said...

Traipsing...wonderful word. Lovely sensory haiku.

Anonymous said...

I love the imagery!

joanne said...

magical....

Wendy Bourke said...

Very pretty poem. And I too, think traipsing is perfect - somehow evoking a feeling of floating or flowing freely.

RMP said...

this made my toes curl—longing to feel the damp coolness of the grass between them and solid earth beneath. lovely!

Optimistic Existentialist said...

You should publish a book of these if you haven't already. Have a great holiday weekend my friend :)

brudberg said...

Walking barefoot in grass is truly something poetic. great one.

Anonymous said...

Oh yes, this one is amazing!

Dave King said...

Impressive. It says just what is essential to say.

Anonymous said...

yup, beautiful, magical, pretty, happy, secretive.