Friday, May 10, 2013

Delphinium



late spring in the meadow
deep blue larkspur
unruffled by the breeze


 © 2013 Jennifer Wagner

18 comments:

  1. I love Delphinium, such a beautiful write.

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  2. Love how you captured that moment when the wind blows but some things just remain unaffected. Beautiful!

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  3. So pretty. You capture the essence of the Takahama poem better than Takahama! LOL.

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  4. This piece conveys a lovely bucolic simplicity conquering up an image of a blue meadow stretching as far as the eye can see. Very pretty, Jennifer.

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  5. ooo cool visuals in the first two lines really pave the way for that movement and breeze in the last....nice haiku....

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  6. A beautiful haiku Jennifer. Nicely done and inspired on the one by kyoshi.

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  7. 'Unruffled' is just perfect for the prompt!Trembling

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  8. You've captured a moment missed by many :)
    Spring Breeze

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  9. LOVE this...this made my Saturday morning :)

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  10. Very nice; I could feel it.

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  11. Spring breeze is such a great rompt. nice take on it :)

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  12. Great - it can be so quiet in the wood meadow...

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