Friday, May 31, 2013

Stone



that place in her heart
at the mention
of his name



© 2013 Jennifer Wagner

for Haiku Heights: Stone
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21 comments:

  1. kaykualaMay 31, 2013 at 8:09 PM

    Depending on the intensity of feelings. One gets a jolt or none at all. The jolt was when young and the 'none at all' most probably (but not always)when they got older! Nicely Jennifer!

    Hank

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  2. Wendy BourkeMay 31, 2013 at 8:26 PM

    I so feel this, Jennifer. And the title could not be more perfect.

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  3. RMPMay 31, 2013 at 8:26 PM

    interesting...the title really ends an extra dimension to this piece. nicely done!

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  4. Susie ClevengerMay 31, 2013 at 9:01 PM

    Goodness...he certainly must have hurt her. Creative take on the prompt

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  5. UnknownMay 31, 2013 at 9:33 PM

    Very good take for a Haiku. Full of emotions !

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  6. Brian MillerJune 1, 2013 at 4:53 AM

    ooo....tight little verse...yes, and makes me wonder a bit of the story behind that...

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  7. LaTonya BaldwinJune 1, 2013 at 5:19 AM

    have we talked? do you know my ex? lol enjoyed.

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  8. ScarletJune 1, 2013 at 5:39 AM

    Yes, that is correct ~ Good one ~

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  9. rallentandaJune 1, 2013 at 6:59 AM

    oh dear..you too eh:)

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  10. Optimistic ExistentialistJune 1, 2013 at 7:11 AM

    It's funny how the mere mention of someone's name can have such an effect on us...but it certainly can. I hope you have a great weekend!

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  11. AnonymousJune 1, 2013 at 8:53 AM

    Oh wow! This is incredible

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  12. NankaJune 1, 2013 at 9:42 AM

    Oh!! this stone weighs so heavily!! May peace reside in there!!

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  13. Maggie GraceJune 1, 2013 at 11:04 AM

    Wow...intense emotion...great haiku!

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  14. LollyJune 1, 2013 at 11:08 AM

    terrific!

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  15. AnonymousJune 1, 2013 at 12:11 PM

    Well done.

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  16. Sadia KhanJune 1, 2013 at 5:13 PM

    Ahhh....I know this feeling, the stone, it hurts the heart of the bearer too..

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  17. grapelingJune 1, 2013 at 5:38 PM

    This tastes real

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  18. AakritiJune 1, 2013 at 11:43 PM

    Mashallah!!:) I feel so honored to have read this simply yet magnificent haiku!:) Thank u for sharing

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  19. FireblossomJune 2, 2013 at 5:48 AM

    I think we've all known *that* feeling.

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  20. AnonymousJune 2, 2013 at 8:24 PM

    Very nice - I hope her heart doesn't turn to stone!

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  21. AnonymousJune 3, 2013 at 7:07 AM

    Powerful and full of emotion. I love this

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