old country road
blanket of pine needles
your cheeks ruddy
my cold hand
scent of leaves
shades of dusk
black crow moon
cinnamon swizzle stick
hints on my lips
and the salt in your kiss
Copyright 2012 Jennifer Wagner
Beautifully done - especially the last two.
I love the imagery. Thank you!
Romantic autumn haiku, love it!
I like how these wake up the senses.
WOW! I love all of these bits of life. I want to live like this. Wonderfully written, seductive, sensual, realistic, with aroma, sights, sounds and seasonal delight.
Very romantic and sensuous haiku ~ (A Creative Harbor)
Absolutely wonderful, awakens every cell in my body... thank you so!
I'm there with you, words paint mood, lovely.x
beginning my morning here with you, and all the better for it!
basking in your glorious word paintings.
each and every one.
seducing a shimmer of gold from every sensual delight.
manna for the autumn soul.
I love "the salt in your kiss". It reminds me of someone. Thanks for visiting my blog.
delicious, sensuous piece, poet!Enjoyed reading them!!
Love the 2nd and 3rd! Could just imagine my cold hands being warmed, and could remember that smell of burning leaves.
Really vivid images, so evocative, and love the title.
These are beautiful. They definitely were written with an autumn state of mind!
That second one is just perfectly beautiful. It's simple but says so much. Great set of haikus. You captured the season so well!
Beautiful haiku ~ I specially love black crow moon and last one, delicious ~
Love the imagery created from these, thanks for sharing
These haiku encapsulate autumn. I especially love "black crow moon". Wowzers!
Beautiful, beautiful, every single one... I think my favorite is " sweeping over/ shades of dusk /black crow moon. You evoked autumn so well, the chill and the feeling sense of it... it is so hot where I'm at your words offered me a temporary respite.
The richness of these is breath-taking. particularly liked "old country road...", "Cattle lowing..." and the delicious sensuality of "crème brûlée..." (both the haiku and the dessert actually ;-)
Thanks Anthony, very much.
Glad you do Pamela, thank you!
Thanks Rachel, very kind of you to comment!
Beautifully done! I loved the cattle lowing a song for autumn----
Thanks Lo-Fi, appreciate your comment!
Spadoman--it's encouraging to me that you connected with it. Thanks so much for your thoughtful words!
Thanks Carol--for your visit and comment!
Thank you Lea--it means a lot that you enjoyed it so.
Thanks very much foxysue--so glad you connected with it.
I'm honored rebecca--thank you!
rebecca--I so appreciate your thoughtful words, your excellent website, and your creative talent.
My pleasure, thanks Cheryl.
Thank you Panchali, enjoyed yours as well!
Thank you for the compliment J!
Robyn, thank you! I'm glad it evoked those memories for you.
Thanks rch--I appreciate your words...and glad you "got" the title!
Thank you Danny.
Thank you Mary, I appreciate your words and the opportunity Poets United provides to poets--thanks again for it!
You've got everything I love about fall all rolled into one beautiful read. Black crow moon is just great!
Thank you very much Laura!
Thanks Heaven, I enjoy your knack for haiku--so I appreciate your words!
Thanks Tatius--for your visit and comment!
Thanks so much Sherry--glad you had a favorite!
I'm glad these haiku did that for you Serena--thanks so much for your complimentary words.
Simon, thank you--your words are such a great compliment!
Thank you very much CdN!
Glad you especially enjoyed that one--thanks so much for commenting Audrey!
Thanks Jotter Girl--so much--I appreciate those words!
This feels like a wonderful tryst!
Glad you "felt" it, thanks Kim!
I am enchanted by the black crow moon!
I’m late making the rounds from Haiku My Heart Friday. Apologies!
Words to the Wise
Sorry for being so late on this 'haiku round'... but now I have time to stop, read it all and thing about it... what a glorious and wonderful series! I especially like the last one... it pictures Autumn as well as love - fabulous!
Happy you came by! And thank you for your comment!
Thanks for visiting, and you're not late at all, at least not to me. I appreciate your words--so much.
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