Friday, August 3, 2012

Chelan Haiku


sunrise
on the vineyard
the bees smell sweet


blue dragonflies
tango above
the lake in sea green


white birch night
the heady scent of you
in bent ryegrass
  

Copyright 2012 Jennifer Wagner  

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16 comments:

Janet Martin said...

...in bent rye grass' Gorgeous. The whole poem is soft and sultry:)

Claudia said...

nice...love all the images...my fav is the one with the blue dragonflies, dancing tango ..nice...

ayala said...

Lovely.. Nice the blue dragonflies dancing the tango :)

Jennifer Wagner said...

Janet, thank you...glad you enjoyed!

Jennifer Wagner said...

...they are fun to watch :) thanks Claudia!

Jennifer Wagner said...

Thank you ayala! :-)

Unknown said...

Color, scent, visuals and tangibles. A sweet multi-sensory piece.

Mary said...

I enjoyed these. Wonderful details brought your haiku alive.

Jennifer Wagner said...

Thanks for commenting Kim :-)

Jennifer Wagner said...

Glad you did Mary, thank you!

Brian Miller said...

really lovely imagery in this...particularly the dragonflies...they are so cool...when we were in branson the other week there was on particular bush that seemed to attract many of them...

kaykuala said...

blue dragonflies
tango above
the lake in sea green

Great observations Jennifer. I could see the dragon flies moving and hovering among the flowers.

Hank

Jennifer Wagner said...

...and the little ones are so fast! Wish I could have gotten a photo. Thanks Brian.

Jennifer Wagner said...

Hank- glad you could "see" them. Most of them especially love to glide just above the lake's surface. Thanks for your visit!

emma said...

Ah, I love where this one takes me. Such a relaxing journey. Beautiful.

Jennifer Wagner said...

Thanks emma, glad to "take" you there. :)