Friday, August 3, 2012

Chelan Haiku


sunrise
on the vineyard
the bees smell sweet


blue dragonflies
tango above
the lake in sea green


white birch night
the heady scent of you
in bent ryegrass
  

Copyright 2012 Jennifer Wagner  

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16 comments:

  1. ...in bent rye grass' Gorgeous. The whole poem is soft and sultry:)

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  2. nice...love all the images...my fav is the one with the blue dragonflies, dancing tango ..nice...

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  3. Lovely.. Nice the blue dragonflies dancing the tango :)

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  4. Color, scent, visuals and tangibles. A sweet multi-sensory piece.

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  5. I enjoyed these. Wonderful details brought your haiku alive.

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  6. really lovely imagery in this...particularly the dragonflies...they are so cool...when we were in branson the other week there was on particular bush that seemed to attract many of them...

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    1. ...and the little ones are so fast! Wish I could have gotten a photo. Thanks Brian.

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  7. blue dragonflies
    tango above
    the lake in sea green

    Great observations Jennifer. I could see the dragon flies moving and hovering among the flowers.

    Hank

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    1. Hank- glad you could "see" them. Most of them especially love to glide just above the lake's surface. Thanks for your visit!

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  8. Ah, I love where this one takes me. Such a relaxing journey. Beautiful.

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  9. Thanks emma, glad to "take" you there. :)

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