Wednesday, May 11, 2016

Soar



Yes, little one,

there are mountains.

And storms.

And rain.


But, oh, the

berries,

nectar,

sky.



© 2016 Jennifer Wagner



18 comments:

Luk Lei said...

Excellent balance, nothing earned, nothing gained.

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Oh my goodness, how I love this! So simple, so beautiful, so true. Gorgeous.

Susan said...

Amen.

Panchali said...

Ah, the berries bring them down to the lesser mortals... :-) Beautiful and crisp piece.

Jae Rose said...

What a wise and knowing poem - we must all try and weather the ups and downs..

Magyar said...

Risk, reward... reality; so well posed, Jen. _m

Sumana Roy said...

this one's a gem Jennifer...love the infinite expanse in the end...

Sanaa Rizvi said...

Beautifully done..!!

Tank said...

Makes me want to reach out take hold of life no matter what the challenges! I love the contrast and perspective, well done.

Mary said...

This has such depth in its few words! And, yes, the berries and nectar and sky!

Wendy Bourke said...

So lovely and sweet - imbued with the joyful nuances of wonder.

Audrey Howitt aka Divalounger said...

This made me smile today! Loved this!

Uma said...

Wonderful.. so much unsaid that speaks to me

Audrey Howitt aka Divalounger said...

This made me smile today! Loved this!

Grace said...

Wow Jennifer ~ A few words but powerfully portrayed ~ There are fruits to be savored after the challenges ~

janetld said...

What a delicate gem!

Buddah Moskowitz said...

Right on. This is perfect. Loved.

Optimistic Existentialist said...

I love this...an optimistic tone :)