Friday, September 19, 2014

wood smoke...



wood smoke
a flannel shirt
rests on the woodpile


© 2014 Jennifer Wagner



11 comments:

Unknown said...

Very delicately and nicely done.

RMP said...

hmmm...you have me wondering where the owner of that shirt is...very nicely written.

Tank said...

I can smell the fire, lovely write and now have the irrestible urge to light a fire and put on my flannel.

Mark said...

I've done my share of cutting and chopping firewood. There comes a point in the process, if the day is not too cold, when you start shedding layers of clothing---even the flannel shirt!

Cutting Winter Wood

Magyar said...

__And >rests< stands out to me, at least the flannel shirt is at rest... and then the fire. Nifty haiku scene, Jenn! (I leave in comment, an echo your verse inspired)

one more log
we rest at this night's fire
a dull axe

_m

janetld said...

You say so much with just a few choice words!

Unknown said...

the delicious possibilities are endless...;)

Scarlet said...

Terrific senryu which leaves much to the imagination ~

Grace

Anonymous said...

Very nice -- the essence of autumn :)

Wendy Bourke said...

You have sketched an image that conjures forth so much. Lovely haiku.

brudberg said...

I like how every word is selectively chosen.. like the word rests.. a flannel shirt? ,, such a great image that paint..