You were
fishing for me—
sliding your hand along
my dorsal and tail fins,
my dark olive hair,
my golden throat.
But you forgot
this bow
of sinew, cedar, and bone,
my Apache blood—
huntress, not game—
and this arrow which carries
your name.
© 2025 Jennifer Wagner
Yes Ma'am. Quadrillific!
ReplyDeleteOooh! I love the ending!
ReplyDeleteI like the hint of eroticism in your quadrille, Jennifer, and the way your poem turns on the ‘bow of sinew, cedar, and bone’. A perfect rebuff. Fisher beware.
ReplyDeleteJennifer, I feel totally caught by that final turn—"huntress, not game" hit me like an arrow. Such power in so few lines.
ReplyDeleteMuch love,
David
SkepticsKaddish.com
Oh my. I love your quadrille, it's complex and reels the reader in.
ReplyDeleteLove your metaphor and surprise ending.
ReplyDeleteAha! Love the pivot here. So cleverly done.
ReplyDeleteA lovely twist, and cleverly done. Such a woman would surely love with fierceness and strength
ReplyDeleteWow! That was awesome, Jennifer!
ReplyDeleteYvette M Calleiro :-)
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
Ooh! sassy ending
ReplyDeleteBeautiful blog
ReplyDeleteI love the strength of your blood coursing through your body and thoughts - Jae
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