Friday, October 19, 2012

Puddle



raindrops
puddle bouncing
i want to play too



Copyright 2012 Jennifer Wagner

37 comments:

  1. Excellent haiku ~ fun and joyous ~ so well penned ~ (A Creative Harbor)

    thanks for coming by and commenting ^_^

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    1. Glad you enjoyed it--thanks for coming by and commenting Carol.

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  2. Don't ever stop playing. I smiled when i read this and felt like pounding my feet in the puddles as well.

    Peace

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  3. Splish splash - puddle bouncing is a perfect description!

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  4. Got caught up with your blog for awhile Jennifer. I love to read poetry and yours is so GOOD. I love the little stories..and the little morals...and everything :] ♥

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    1. Wow, thanks Lisa, that's such a great compliment. Glad you came by :-)

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  5. No picture needed, all in the words, beautiful! x

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  6. I havent tried haiku yet, hopefully soon...

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  7. Me too, I want to play in your haiku puddle jumping!

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  8. I love this! Such a playful image comes to my mind.

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  9. Rain is the most magical elixer where I live...beautiful words, yours are!

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    1. We get a lot of it--too much I think sometimes. Maybe I'll think of it as a magical elixir when it feels like that!

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  10. so much imagery in my head for such a short poem. Bravo!

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  11. some rains just call out to be played in!!
    ~Dawn

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  12. Love this imagery ... nicely done!

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