Childhood
My hand in the river
of ice cold water
charges me even as the sun
weaves its warm and dreamy
spell.
Cool pebbles bounce in the
stream
and I am taken with them,
down, down, down,
and back up again.
Two smiles play on my lips—
contentment and mischief;
and I am sure that, today,
I
don’t need more than this.
Copyright
2012 Jennifer Wagner
16 comments:
This is one of my favorite poems that you've written - thanks for sharing it!
Well, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Oh this draws the reader into its dreamy state, trailing one's hand in water under the warmth of the sun. Lovely.
I'm glad it drew you in, Sherry, thank you!
No, who would need more? Delightful!
The hand dabbling in water in Nature's world is so envigorating for the soul!
This is truly beautiful and filled with warmth.
(Consider ridding your posts of word verification to make it easier for others to comment?)
True, Gemma! Thank you for visiting, I appreciate your comment.
Mary, thank you very much. And thanks for mentioning that annoying bot-filter feature. I thought I had that turned off!
I'm glad you enjoyed it Rosemary! Thank you for commenting.
"Two smiles play on my lips—
contentment and mischief;
and I am sure that, today,
I don’t need more than this."
I love days or moments like that. Wonderful
Me too Kiana, they are some of the best. Thank you for visiting my blog and leaving your thoughts! :)
I love the last stanza. Who could need more indeed?
PattiKen- thanks for visiting and commenting! I'm glad you connected with this one.
very good sharing of childhood uncertainty.
Hi wild magnolia, thanks for commenting on my post. Childhood uncertainty was not the concept I was writing from in this piece, interesting viewpoint!
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