Thursday, March 6, 2025

in a name

 

 

in the 70’s we were everywhere—a

white wave

 

of bell-bottoms, hot pants, platforms and disco

at night—

 

us, jennifers—meant to be, I suppose,

fair, soft—

 

but to that dirt-gravel half of my history, i’ve always been “gin” and i like how

that hits

 

how you say it with a lick of

your lips

 

 

© 2025 jennifer wagner

 

 

At dVerse MTB: The Poetry of Names, Laura has us writing WaltMarie poems about the meaning or history of our names.  You can visit the link to learn more about this form and visit Writer’s Digest as well.

 

*smaller hand-held devices may not display this poem true to the ten-line format due to compacting


11 comments:

  1. Hey gin! I escaped being a John, was the only Eric for a long time. Now they are everywhere, funny how they wax and wane in popularity over time

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  2. Your poem made me smile, Gin! :D

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  3. You got the even lines making a nice little mini-poem too! Well done.

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  4. I’ve known a few Jennifers and, when I hear or read that name, I’m tempted to break into the old Donovan song, ‘Jennifer Juniper’ – and that ties in with Gin. I love the ending!

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  5. brilliant shot of the WaltMarie, Gin (my sister is Jennifer)

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  6. I love the name Jennifer but Gin sounds glorious!

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  7. My dear friend Jen who still works at the old salt mine, told me the same thing, that she was part of an avalanche of Jennifers. I like that you have options!

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  8. This is the best of the bunch so far Gin

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  9. Great poem, Jennifer!

    Yvette M Calleiro :-)
    http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com

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  10. Perfect Waltmarie, and that "gin"-- well, you set it up real good. Loved "that dirt-gravel half of my history" -- you make every turn of phrase look so easy. Brilliant.

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